I Married a Disfigured Woman for My Brother, but She Was a Stunning Beauty

Many novels are written too bluntly or are simply padding out the word count with a chronological account. This is where Aunt Qiong Yao's works shine. Authors need to read more good works to create better content. I'm just a reader, enjoying the reading experience for free, so please forgive me!

The excessive focus on the three characters' grudges at the beginning is a mistake. The lack of clear character development for the male protagonist is often the biggest flaw. A well-written story hinges on well-established characters; the male protagonist's charm must be showcased.

Sometimes, don't portray people as sycophants; deep affection isn't about licking boots, it's about fulfilling someone's needs. Therefore, the soul of a devoted wanderer is often free and unrestrained.

Furthermore, if the Shen family women are vain and materialistic, then Xu Nuo's character is nothing special; birds of a feather flock together. The author could have easily depicted a villain interfering and sowing discord (though cliché), but that would have made the characters and plot more believable.