Snow Wolf King: I Picked Up Two Babies from the Start, and They're Reincarnated Empresses?

I've read over 270 chapters so far, and those two characters seem really stupid! They keep talking about the Wolf Father's murderous ambush, or the hints are obvious, but they just won't believe them. If the author could make them a little smarter, maybe the book's rating could go up.

In the early chapters, was the author writing without thinking? Both characters are from the same world as Mu Shentian, so similar, evolving step by step in the same direction, yet the author kept denying it. Every time a monster appears, the author says the Wolf King died there, every other monster dies there, and even believes in the butterfly effect—is this a joke?

The two women were talking too much nonsense; they were just padding the word count. By chapter 400-something, it felt like a completely different author had written it; even the names had changed. If the maximum score is 10, I will give a maximum of 2 points.

And those two empress reincarnations were human girls picked up by the wolf father, not wolf cubs.

I suggest rewriting chapters after 400. Stop using AI to write it; it was going quite well, but I've ruined it completely. I hope the author sees this comment and will revise it; otherwise, it's unreadable.

As I said before, this kind of novel has all the flaws. The Empress Demon Lord is brainless, especially in the beginning. Whenever the protagonist encounters a problem, she immediately exclaims, "So that's where Wolf Dad died!" This is particularly problematic given the protagonist's rebirth and apparent ignorance of everything except the novel *Ling Ji*.

You can update less, but think it through.

The entire plot is fraught with danger; even with a system, you can't be invincible; and there are two empresses—it's really mind-numbing.

They really like suppressing combat power; they can't even figure out how to cheat. Every single one of their levels is higher than the others, haha.

I admit your earlier writing was very good, but you might as well not write the rest; even AI seems better than this.