Snow Wolf King: I Picked Up Two Babies from the Start, and They're Reincarnated Empresses?

I've read 18 chapters so far and can't continue. Some parts are described in a way that's a bit idiotic and awkward. For example: you never leave the primeval forest at the start of the game, and then you're brewing Chinese medicine in the primeval forest—that's pretty awesome. If you said you were brewing herbs, I wouldn't even say anything.

It's a heartwarming read, a bit slow-burning, but these two girls are reincarnations of an empress. However, their dialogue doesn't sound like that of an empress reincarnation; it's a bit naive and innocent.

The two empresses are such a bunch of dim-witted fools, it's uncomfortable to watch. The wolf king and the wolf pack are quite good. I hope they improve the intelligence of the two empresses later on. Look into my eyes, did you hear me?

It's really well-written! The plot is also very engaging. Haha, the writing is really immature, with a lot of repetitive phrases, like "the Empress and Demon Lord haven't experienced warmth in a long time." The idea of ​​treating someone like family is okay once or twice, but it gets really annoying after a while. It's like padding the word count, wasting a good premise.

Neither of the two empresses showed any intelligence whatsoever throughout the entire event.

It's either the Empress who's stunned, or the Demon Lord who's stunned—it's all just filler content!

To be honest, the writing is alright, but the forced stupidity of the two kids to highlight the protagonist is handled poorly. It's one or two times, but basically every time the protagonist becomes a little more powerful, there's this stupidity issue. The main problem is that the stupidity is almost always the same.

Every time, it's the little baby saying that there's no Wolf Dad in *Ling Ji*, a powerful enemy appears, and Wolf Dad is in danger and about to die. Then it says they've been reborn and their fate is changing, and when the next enemy appears, it says again that there's no Wolf Dad in *Ling Ji* and Wolf Dad is about to die. This is contradictory, okay? There's absolutely no logic. Your plot is good, you could say that 👍🏻, but the logic is 💩.

It's better to use AI to write this. The character designs are ridiculously stupid, and even the character level settings are consistently wrong. I can understand wanting to express the dark side of humanity, but please don't portray the characters as having the mental capacity of kindergarten students. As the plot progresses, many later settings don't match the earlier ones; it's just padding the word count.

If it weren't for those two empresses, it would be a decent, enjoyable read. I just don't understand why they had to add them. It's not just bad, it's not good either, it's just awful.