Transmigrate into a Book: The Fake Heiress Is Held by a Battle-Hardened Hero

I was thinking that several of the heroine's brothers have wives and children. Are they used to it?

It's okay, the whole family came here neatly, it's quite magical!

It's simple and easy to understand, and the ending is satisfying.

The plot and setting are quite good. It's not the usual kind of going to the countryside to farm and go to the black market. There is no emotional drama at the moment. The heroine is ruthless when she should be ruthless, but she is still kind. Her brothers love her very much and they have a good understanding with each other. Typos, too many words, and too few words are logically common problems in many books nowadays and can be ignored, but this is a bit too much, so I hope you can pay more attention when writing. There are also many places that jump back and forth, which is a bit baffling. I feel like these problems can be avoided by paying a little attention when writing. It seems that I like the plot so far. I hope it can be improved. I believe it can become a good-looking book! One more small suggestion: the heroine shouldn't be so unscrupulous when using things in the space. They probably don't have the capital to protect themselves without being able to explain the source, so they can't rely entirely on the halo of the protagonist. It's better to keep a low profile.

It's quite nice. Apart from slight typos, there's nothing to complain about. Come on!