Transmigrate into a Book: The Fake Heiress Is Held by a Battle-Hardened Hero

The plot and setting are quite good. It's not the usual kind of going to the countryside to farm and go to the black market. There is no emotional drama at the moment. The heroine is ruthless when she should be ruthless, but she is still kind. Her brothers love her very much and they have a good understanding with each other. Typos, too many words, and too few words are logically common problems in many books nowadays and can be ignored, but this is a bit too much, so I hope you can pay more attention when writing. There are also many places that jump back and forth, which is a bit baffling. I feel like these problems can be avoided by paying a little attention when writing. It seems that I like the plot so far. I hope it can be improved. I believe it can become a good-looking book! One more small suggestion: the heroine shouldn't be so unscrupulous when using things in the space. They probably don't have the capital to protect themselves without being able to explain the source, so they can't rely entirely on the halo of the protagonist. It's better to keep a low profile.

The heroine's IQ is worrying. She dares to use any kind of hover motorcycle. She writes a lot of things in a messy way and is inconsistent. I can't read the article anymore.

It's quite nice. Apart from slight typos, there's nothing to complain about. Come on!

The relationship between the male and female protagonists only began to develop in the later stages. The female protagonist is an interstellar book traveler with 🈶 five element elemental powers, and has a 🈳 interstitial button 🐂🍺. The heroine's interstellar parents and six brothers have also traveled through time... The typo in 📚 is a bit confusing in my opinion. The original plot of the male and female protagonists "Lou Yonggang and Qiu Mingyue" was changed due to the butterfly ཐིཋྀ effect produced after the female protagonist Gu Qinghe "Qiu Xue" rescued the male protagonist Shen Weidong...

Why is it so messy? Enemy agents are everywhere, passing through them everywhere

Like 🥰, good

Are you sure this is a cool article? Where is the fun

I was thinking that several of the heroine's brothers have wives and children. Are they used to it? 😜😜😜😜

It's okay, the whole family came here neatly, it's quite magical!

In fact, the author's writing style is quite good, but the writing style is too good and the writing is a bit verbose.