The Lin Family's Daughter Begins Her Path to Immortality

Even if Heilian is a god, he knows that the heroine will always be an idiot, ignorant and calculated.

I read this book because of the author! But! I really can't stand it anymore. I know the author wants to write the characters more delicately, but it feels a bit "top-heavy". In the first 30 chapters, a description is repeated more than a dozen times. Not opening one's mouth depends entirely on mental activities, brain movements, and facial expressions. What sounds good is that it is too delicate, but what is not good is that it just makes me dumb when I write it alone! I really want to continue watching it but I can't stand it anymore! Current environment + psychological activities + a few facial expressions + mental twists and turns = not a word! It's amazing to be able to write nonsense into nonsense

It is estimated that this is an early book written by the author, and it is directly incomparable with the later books!

The biggest failure is that the parents who love the heroine so much let their children work while other people's children go to school? This is totally illogical.

If there are bad people jumping around, I can only say that they are not my cup of tea.

Ugly. The writing style has the flavor of ancient Internet literature but not the coolness of ancient Internet literature, and the plot really makes me suspect that the author switched from male to female channel. Not only is the heroine's route like the straightforward plot of cheating and then being slapped in the face in the ancient male channel cool novels, but even the research on female psychology is comparable to that of male channel authors, and even It's an old-time cool novel, but it doesn't feel good at all. The heroine has a feeling of pretending to be detached. She doesn't explain to her colleagues who accuse her of spreading rumors about herself, even if her friends create opportunities for explanation. I'm really speechless after reading more than 50 chapters. It's so hard to watch. When the heroine went to buy seeds, she got good ginseng seeds due to a mistake by a seed company employee. The man named Mu in the back slandered the heroine for stealing seeds and the heroine refused unjustly. I don't know what he meant. I didn't know the man when I saw this. How many people slandered him for being a nymphomaniac to such an extent that he was so stupid. Not to mention the man who slandered the heroine, followed her, threatened her friends, etc., The heroine's parents actually let this man into their house because he looked good and wanted him to be their daughter's boyfriend? ? ? Moreover, the two old men and the heroine are both immortal cultivators, so why are they still worried that the heroine is a leftover girl? ? ? It's hard to imagine that a female channel would have such difficult-to-stretch articles. I seriously suspect that all the comments on the articles are fake.

It is best not to mention modern times when writing about cultivating immortals. If you mention modern times, it will make people speechless and dislike them.

Compared to the author's other works, I really couldn't stand this one. I was so angry that I couldn't stand it after dozens of chapters.

The previous plot was okay, but the alien invasion part was a bit awkward; there were too many typos throughout the story, and it felt average.

It seems a little bit, I vomited, the heroine likes to be the third party, the third party is not correct, she actually got such a high score