Global Cataclysm: Bringing My Family to Feast in the Apocalypse

Is it not updating anymore? It's been three months since the last update.

I've completely messed up my back. I shouldn't be wrong about basic common sense. Three months have passed in a year, and there are still seven months left? So there are only ten months in a year?!

Why not find a better location and spend your own money to renovate it properly?

I suggest the author avoid using too much of an omniscient perspective in the writing, as skipping over many plot points can create a strong sense of disjointedness for the reader, making it feel like one moment they're on one topic and the next they're on another, with no continuity.

Many sentences and paragraphs are awkward, and the meanings of the preceding and following paragraphs are inconsistent. I don't know if it was written by AI.

The article is a bit difficult to read in some places; it feels like something is missing, which is frustrating. The writing style just doesn't feel right.

That's awful. The protagonist bought so many supplies, even getting so many for free, yet he's so afraid of everything, always riding his beat-up tricycle, never daring to use his own car. And he talks about providing a life of luxury for his family? He's more likely to be a coward with his whole family. Were all those supplies meant to be used as offerings?

It's too rough; the plot moves too fast and lacks detail.

I have a small question: in these kinds of apocalyptic stories, when it's clearly stated that they've already stockpiled enough supplies for their entire lives, why don't they leave a way out for others when they're doing free purchases? They could have kept half for themselves. Why is it that every time they're like a locust swarming through the land, taking away supplies that they don't have or haven't stockpiled enough of?

I'm still a fledgling, let me raise me first and see how it goes.