The Sinister Car Broker

It was interesting at first, but it got increasingly mediocre as it went on, and the ending was especially bad...

The plot starts off rather uneventfully, but as you watch further, more and more things are introduced, and the protagonist becomes involved in more and more things. Everything points to one place: when will they be able to go to Yunnan Province?

It's quite scary, but well written.

Keep it up, author! And by the way, could you please add this to your favorites and visit my page?