My Spells Train Themselves

Where did the author come from? Is he a foreigner? When listening to a novel using audio, the audio becomes choppy when talking about a certain paragraph.

Please don't add symbols to people's names. Consider how I feel when listening to books. It feels weird to hear people's names stuck one after another @Author

In the beginning, he acted like a stallion, flirting with women when he saw them, then giving up.

Yes, the characters are more magical and exotic.

Nice. It's so exciting that the main character has personality. There is meaning in what you say.

The one thing the author is bad about is that he made this character a bit too scumbag in the later period. There are a lot of beautiful young women around him, such as me, the beautiful woman in white robe, the young woman in blue skirt, and most importantly, there are too many cute lolita. There are too many descriptions of shy things, which are a bit flashy, and the author needs to strengthen them.

Next is this stallion's pornographic book.

The plot has ups and downs, the language is vivid, and the details are described very well. I think the author has written very well. There are many things worth learning from the virtual world. In my opinion, although it is bragging, it is still okay. It is just that the driving in this part is a bit weak and needs to be improved.

Support yourself, but don't go too far! Although I think I worked very hard, my writing may still be a little bit not very good.