The Peerless War Dragon

Pluto is still good to read, and this book should be reworked.

It's really written in a completely wrong way.

The male protagonist in this novel basically has no friends. By the way, every one looks down on the male protagonist, and then gets slapped in the face by the male protagonist. The dignified King of Dark Night's own subordinates are targeting him everywhere, looking down on himself, being looked down upon by others wherever he goes, and then slapping others in the face. They fight and beat people anytime and anywhere. Unfortunately, the person being beaten is still not afraid of being beaten countless times.

Why do most novels have to describe people other than the male protagonist as having negative IQs? Why do all heroines have to be written as forgetting to bring something when they go out?

The last chapter is not very well written.

It would be perfect if you write more about the emotional things with Lin Xueyao