The Ancient Starry Sky Emperor

Well, I've looked at a few pages, and I don't know what to say. Personally, I have no desire to continue reading. Maybe it's because I've read quite a few different types of books, and I just don't particularly like this kind.

I've read over 130 chapters of this book. The overall impression is that it's rambling and out of place. The protagonist is a special forces captain reborn ten years in the future, a character designed to be incredibly powerful. However, after his rebirth, he almost never achieves his goals smoothly when faced with problems. He spends over two months preparing to kill a mad royal from a defeated and surrendered nation, only to find himself in the enemy's ambush zone. Then, two guys, clearly weaker than the enemy, somehow manage to brute force their way out of an enemy force several times their size. It's baffling how the enemy's ambush was set up; did these idiots run into an even bigger idiot? It seems this protagonist, when faced with unexpected events, can only drift along, waiting for luck or asking others to solve the problem, yet he still thinks he's incredibly capable. The world-building is also very strange. The randomly flying celestial bodies are said to be going out of gravity in another hundred years, and they actually have a complete ecosystem. In a grand cosmic worldview, a large base might only house around ten thousand people. A defeated and surrendered Qiang tribe, with only their own planet, dares to sow discord between an interstellar empire. Even without planet-destroying cannons, they should at least have the skill to burn glass spheres, right? It's just a planet; no matter how abundant the resources, if the input exceeds the output, they should have taken action. After burning it into glass spheres, some of the resources should still be mineable, right? It feels a bit more plausible that the whole story takes place in ancient times on a continent.

The writing isn't bad, and the plot flows smoothly, but it focuses too much on the narrative and lacks originality and ingenuity, making it less engaging towards the end.

I've come to read your work; would you like to exchange items?

After reading the first chapter, I felt that the pretentious trope was used too crudely. It would be better if there were no face-slapping scenes at the beginning. This part would be more acceptable if placed later in the novel.

Only children make choices.

Qin Xiao: That's right! I'm straighter than the Holy Lance!

Holy Lance: I'm familiar with this; I have the right to speak on the far right.

Sun Dianchen: He gave too much.

It's not that I don't want to refuse, it's just that the other party is offering too much.