A Ming Dynasty Civil Servant

Under the name of Fenghuo? That's where the skill ends.

What are you writing about?

There are too many typos and unclear sentences. .

The narration of the story is so poor that it's not enjoyable to read. Is there any story interspersed? It's just code words. I feel bored after reading it for a while.

Can the author be over thirty?

The huge poisonous point made me abandon the book at Chapter 50 It feels like someone else is writing it, and the logic is broken for me. I know the author wants to write more comfortably, but it really embarrasses me to death.

This horse riding directly leaks military secrets

The writing is very realistic, but the style of writing looks awkward. It doesn't have much literary talent but it still writes so much psychological discussion. There is too much nonsense, so just write honestly.

The overall logic is relatively complete, but in the structure of the novel, there are too many third-perspective explanations, which turn the characters in the novel into the author's own thinking. It is too easy to jump out of the plot and scenes, making it boring to read.

There's no tide point, it's as bland as water, and it doesn't look good.