The Little Healer-Martial Artist

This is really boring; it's so timid with women, it has no masculinity at all.

Sometimes, abandoning one's true self to pursue something against one's conscience really does happen.

Some women are truly arrogant, but actually incredibly foolish. Those who genuinely love them won't cherish them, while those who toy with them will treasure them. That's just the way the world is.

It's written so accurately, it really feels like the real thing.

This is really courting death.

A love story with a push-and-pull dynamic would be more exciting; the current entanglement feels like a snotty nose that hasn't been wiped clean while blowing your nose, which is uncomfortable.

Letting others down is inevitable, so sometimes it's unnecessary to elaborate on these kinds of feelings and waste everyone's time.

The enemy wasn't found very well; whatever happens won't be too exciting.

I can tolerate mistakes, but too many typos in an article is disrespectful to the reader.

To say Su Yan isn't materialistic? Have they forgotten how the protagonist was verbally abused when he first came down the mountain? What was the author thinking? Is this a simp story? This is a complete simp's diary!