The Princess Consort Is Too Delicate to Touch

I don't know if this is your first time writing a novel, but I feel the pacing is a bit too fast. You seem to want to cover all the characters, plot lines, and mysteries too quickly to smoothly transition to the easier middle parts of the story. However, this accelerated pace has created a somewhat chaotic atmosphere. Important characters are vague, and their personalities aren't well-developed.

Some people may be tough on the outside, but they secretly care about others.

There are actually quite a few suspects in this matter, with the Duke of Lu's mansion being the most obvious one. However, the fact that such a thing happened right after they had persuaded the engagement to be called off makes it highly suspicious. Unless there are too many idiots in the Lu family, it is impossible for such a thing to happen. Furthermore, the Wei family is too powerful.

I firmly believe that someone who loves you to the core, even if they lose their memory and forget everything about you, will still blush and rub their hands nervously as they stand in front of you when they meet again, asking, "Have we met somewhere before?" And this is the beginning of a brand new story for you and him. So forget about the past, it's no big deal.

From the beginning to now, I roughly understand what kind of story "Shallow Love" is trying to tell: two people who once loved each other, due to some accident, one loses his memory and the other seeks revenge, creating a mystery that forms the core of the entire storyline. When the mystery is solved, the two will reconcile. But things won't end there.

Interesting. It seems that Feng Jinye's amnesia is not simple. I'll make a bold hypothesis here: First, Feng Jinye once said that he would only marry Qianyu and would not take any concubines. So, many things happened in between, causing him to use some means to forget.

In simple terms: You don't understand me at all. Feng Jinye: I understand as soon as you tell me. In short: You should understand even if I don't say it. Feng Jinye: How would I understand if you didn't tell me? Qianyu: Yes, I understand. I'll disappear for a while. Feng Jinye: What do you know? Qianyu: I don't understand anything. (After saying this, she stormed out the door.) Feng Jinye: ?

I feel the pacing is a bit too fast. In other novels, the male protagonist would have to be suspicious for at least dozens of chapters. But then again, this is more in line with the young and intelligent Feng Jinye. If he couldn't figure it out for a long time, it would be a bit unrealistic. However, this makes the plot development a bit more difficult to write. Good luck, Qianqing.

Actually, I feel that the "panic" here is a bit off. First, Qianyu had previously attempted to assassinate Feng Jinye, and after many years, she returned to the Prince's mansion. Judging from her past actions, her mental fortitude should be very high. Therefore, while there should have been a hint of panic in her eyes, it quickly vanished, replaced by a smile.

The male and female leads' names are so Mary Sue-ish, I can't even watch a minute of it.