You Actually Want to Date Me, a Hokage?

You mentioned in our group that you write novels, so I took a look. First of all, the protagonist's contradictory personality is portrayed quite well, leaving aside the ability settings (I'm pretty casual about that). The protagonist's opening view that killing one person is a crime, killing ten thousand makes one a hero is quite interesting, although it's completely a self-destructive mentality, but this also contributes to the appeal of winning over Senshin. Secondly, there are shortcomings. Besides your own conceived characters, your descriptions of the characters in the original work are somewhat inadequate. Shido is barely acceptable, but the other characters are much worse. I even sensed between the lines that you somewhat look down on her...

As a seasoned (and somewhat ridiculously so) fan of Date A Live adaptations, I stumbled upon a novel with a fresh theme: time-travel and character transfer. This is it! Seeing Naruto ignited my inner chuunibyou (a Japanese term for someone with delusions of grandeur). Naruto, who loves ramen; Sasuke, who's quiet; and Sakura, who's incredibly strong—their growth is just... Too long! The anime's episode releases are also... Too slow! Ahem, that's not the point. What impressed me most about Naruto was the passionate love story between Naruto and Sasuke...

The following opinions are purely personal (after all, you can't please everyone), and are offered for your amusement only. The title itself was very appealing—Naruto: Date A Live. The premise is truly excellent; mastering Naruto's abilities in the Date A Live world, Truth-Seeking Balls, Mangekyou Sharingan, Flying Thunder God Technique—just thinking about it is intriguing. Initially, I kept thinking, with Kamui, Flying Thunder God Technique, and Truth-Seeking Balls, isn't that invincible? Why bother with a Date A Live? Just conquer the world and be unstoppable! Fortunately, the author added a significant limitation: the protagonist's mana bar is insufficient, making me revisit playing Kassadin in League of Legends without building Rod of Ages. Instead, I went straight for Mejai's Soulstealer, Void Staff, and...

The author must be a Bilibili (Bilibili is a Chinese video sharing website) bigwig, with all sorts of Bilibili memes popping up everywhere, such as "Jin Ke La" (a popular Chinese novel) and "Philosophy♂" (a term used to describe a certain type of Chinese philosophy). It's safe to say this is a book that only those who aren't familiar with Bilibili's gay and fujoshi (female fans of BL) culture would understand. The Bilibili influence is definitely to my liking. What I find most interesting is the combination of Bilibili memes with the Date A Live gender-swap trope, a novel approach that successfully compensates for the rough edges of the work itself. However, I never care about the objective quality of a book; I only care about whether it suits my taste. Overall, it's very much to my liking, and for a Philosophy♂ scholar like myself, it's quite good.

Senshin's strength is indeed off the charts, but her lack of chakra is a major problem. I think it would be even better if Senshin had the Nine-Tails, because in the Miku arc, Tohka's strength after the reversal was too great, and Miku's manipulation was difficult to dodge. I think Senshin should have unleashed Kurama and gained a pair of Rinne Sharingan. This way, Senshin's chakra shortage problem would be solved by Kurama. However, this would make Senshin absolutely too strong, so I struggled with the idea myself. The book is very good, I really like the plot. This was also the first Date A Live fanfiction I read on Pineapple Bun. Actually, I'm just a newbie and don't know much about storytelling, but I really like it...

The author is currently writing a new book, also in the Date A Live/Naruto genre. If you'd like to read it, it's best to join the fan group. Once this current book is finished, the author will return to rewrite it.

For some reason, in the development and progress of SF (Site of Fantasy), from the shift in gender-bending to the metamorphosis genre, it's almost impossible to find a uniquely styled, bittersweet romance novel about gender-bending. Until today, when I was disillusioned with SF and about to switch to Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform), besides uninstalling SF, a novel I'd kept in my favorites a week ago but was too lazy to delete, "You Actually Want to Date Me, the Hokage," appeared at the top of my bookshelf. Suddenly remembering the Naruto manga I'd seen that morning (just kidding!), I clicked on it out of curiosity. The first few pages made me laugh out loud in the middle of the night, so I couldn't help but post a short review. From the comments section, I learned that the author had disappeared for a long time...

This book may need to be rewritten; please see the update in the setting volume for details.

Actually, I think Senshin could use the Three Body Technique. For example, Shadow Clone Jutsu could involve infusing a Truth-Seeking Ball with spiritual energy, splitting it into multiple clones, and then transforming them into Senshin's likeness. Transformation Jutsu could involve enveloping the entire body in Truth-Seeking Balls and infusing them with spiritual energy to change appearance. Substitution Jutsu... Emmm, you could infuse Truth-Seeking Balls with spiritual energy, and then when an enemy hits Senshin, the Truth-Seeking Ball could replace her. Actually, there could be many other ninjutsu. Kakashi's Chidori could involve infusing Truth-Seeking Balls with spiritual energy, holding them in his hand, and then using a (pseudo) Chidori Great Fireball. You could also wrap your hand in Truth-Seeking Balls, infuse them with spiritual energy, form hand seals, and then put your hand to your mouth to unleash the attack... Emmm...

Overall, this book is excellent, but I feel the character development is slightly lacking. Take Qianxin's past life and the killing, for example. As an ordinary person in her past life, even in its darkest state, the transition wouldn't be so rapid. And as an elf, she may have destroyed their loved ones. The wills of AST and DEM are different. AST simply wanted revenge because their family and friends died in the spacequake (to put it simply, A killed B's parents, B went to A to protect them but was clearly no match for A, so A killed B, the reason being, "You wanted to kill me, so I killed you." How would you feel?). ...