The Angel Girl Who Signed a Pet Contract

I suddenly dreamt about what happened next, so I'm going to continue updating now qwq

I initially clicked on this book because of the title, mainly because of the word "(pet)"... Secondly, the gender-swapped plot and the first-person narrative style are excellent, in my opinion. Let's talk about the word "(pet)." Its definition is simply a pet, a plaything, and naturally, a fighting pet as well. The initial forced contract was something I, as a reader, strongly disliked. However, the book will definitely show how the protagonist resists or breaks the contract. This very opening has already drawn me in, and the subsequent plot points are all very engaging...

Finally, I've received another book review that I can read smoothly. It's really rare... *Cough* Overall, there are no problems. The sentences are fluent, the language flows smoothly, and there are detailed descriptions and emotional moments interspersed throughout. However, is it just my imagination that I don't find Yi Yi particularly cute...? Everyone can see the good parts, so pointing them out here won't be very useful. Therefore, I'll just directly address the shortcomings I found. First, the opening line, "There is no God in the world," I haven't found anything that corresponds to it throughout the current chapters. There does seem to be a similar line at the beginning of a chapter, though. This is useless...

Let's start by reflecting on ourselves. First, if I hadn't seen the title, that "you think it's that simple?" Declaration, and the mention of transformation, I absolutely wouldn't have clicked in, clinging to that sliver of hope that someone could truly elevate this theme. This inability to treat these crucial "random samples" with equality, stemming entirely from my own background, is something I absolutely need to reflect on. Secondly, there's my own relationship with the transformation theme. My initial encounter with transformation fiction wasn't out of interest, nor because it was "fun." From a young age, I've recognized the differences between people, which has had a profound impact on me when I faced setbacks. I am very aware...

The book was quite engaging at first, but it became boring towards the end. The character development felt awkward; the characters' emotions jumped too quickly, lacking a gradual development. The eldest princess's emotional changes were overly dramatic and lacked subtlety. The excessive focus on warmth felt like eating only candy – unpleasant. The fight between the Red Dragon and Yi Yi was both laughable and pathetic. Since the Third Princess was to be a villain, there should have been a supporting character to highlight her personality. A well-developed villain could leave a lasting impression on the reader, comparable to the protagonist. Therefore, my small suggestion is: create more conflict, allowing the characters to grow through adversity. Let the events…

Forced contracts are disgusting.

This kind of contract is incredibly hurtful. It grants you a sliver of self-awareness, yet forces you to submit to an uncontrollable body. In every sense, it's a form of mental torture and a blow to your soul. After reading the beginning, I felt an overwhelming sense of unease and resentment, perhaps that's the crux of the work?

Some people have a very bad attitude towards Lilith, and as a Lilith supporter, I have to speak up. Yi Yi's behavior is immature and rebellious. Think about it: someone reincarnated into another world, if she hadn't been captured by Lilith and had instead been randomly dropped into the wilderness—as the story shows, the wilderness is incredibly dangerous, with dwarves, succubi, orcs, etc.—And she only managed to overcome these difficulties with the help of the celestial spirits. If Yi Yi hadn't had Lilith when she first arrived in this other world (don't tell me there were other better people), would she have been raped or enslaved? Does she think she has some kind of superhuman ability just because she's reincarnated into another world...?

Having read some of it, I only felt uncomfortable and conflicted. Unless the princess isn't a romantic partner, but given the rarity of this contract-based theme, I'll still give it full marks. However, I must point out the contradictions I noticed: 1. The contract is forcibly signed, accompanied by immense pain (which is normal, but with the subsequent conditions, it's practically poison), and there's a chance of consciousness being erased. 2. After the contract, increased affection is normal, but weakened autonomy means she agrees to everything, even her speech is forcibly influenced. 3. The contract language suggests the author has definitely read Celis's work, but I feel this princess is completely incomparable to Ellen; she's entirely self-aware...

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