Bestow Power Upon My Demon Queen Sister

The beginning was alright, it felt quite novel, and the early plot gave off a powerful vibe. But later on, you slowly revealed your sexual fetishes, just like that novel about child control. After attracting readers, you focused on your own sexual fantasies and indulged in self-gratification, completely disregarding the readers' tolerance. The novel included NTR-like plots, which were like poison mixed with excrement for the readers. I bet you're going to write NTR scenes with Vera and doujinshi about Ikana and her adoptive father later on. It's a shame you don't write erotic novels. Goodbye, chicken, I just wanted to vent. That's all. This is my alternate account.

This is the first novel I've read that depicts the dark side of life. Some people consider it a masterpiece, but I think it merely satisfies your craving for taboos and immorality, reminding me of the feeling I had when I played Dark Blue. However, I don't mean to criticize this novel. Personally, I think it should be considered a near-masterpiece. Firstly, the subject matter is the dark side, which most people dislike. The author's writing is also very good, and the character portrayals and their emotions are very successful. But at the same time, it also brings a very depressing reading experience.

The author's writing style and narrative structure are quite good, and the plot progression is relatively reasonable. If the later plot is well-rounded, it will be a masterpiece. However, some readers who blindly whitewash the characters are, frankly, extremely naive. The purple-haired character claims the eldest brother killed soldiers for honor, the second brother deserves to die for flirting, and the sister's love of luxury is a disservice to the country, therefore the protagonist's entire family should die, and he wants to kill them for revenge, while also controlling Abner to manipulate the country. I can only laugh. What's wrong with the royal family enjoying some rights while fulfilling their responsibility to uphold national sovereignty? Is a prince who flirts but doesn't leave offspring still deserving of death? Is a princess who likes extravagance...?

First and foremost, this is a masterpiece in the making. Why, in this light novel world full of little sisters and daughters, am I completely smitten? As someone with a mother complex, all I feel is a slight warmth from those breasts. Speaking of which, I initially thought the heroine was Orianna, but it was a complete surprise. Based on the principle that novels with unpredictable plots are rarely bad, this novel is on another level. Moreover, the author clearly put a lot of effort into the descriptions and character settings, but the fact that the entire bakery family dies feels a bit overdone. Thinking back to the previous book with two yandere mothers, I remembered that Spicy Chicken Hot Pot often wrote things like that. Finally, I want a busty mom...

This person writes novels just to disgust readers; I suggest all book lovers avoid reading them.

I won't comment much on the female lead, but I really need to understand the male lead thoroughly. The best way to understand someone is to completely immerse yourself in their shoes. If you only fantasize about your own courage as the male lead, but forget his true situation, then you'll never understand the despair he felt. Many people will think of Amano Yukiteru; he's as gentle and weak as the male lead, but later on, Yukiteru is willing to do anything to revive his parents and sacrifice himself to save Yuno. The male lead also plans revenge, but in such a state of despair—from sadness, helplessness, hatred, and fear—he's driven to madness and suicide...

The story is actually alright, quite interesting. The initial setup was rather boring; I dropped it after a few chapters, but picked it up again and was completely hooked by the climax of the coup. Now the plot has returned to a more relaxed pace, and I'm looking forward to seeing what the author does next. However, I'm fantasizing about what might happen later. What if the male lead and his sister finally let go of their exes and are about to accept each other, when Vera reappears, and it turns out the sister's first love isn't actually dead? Then the hard-won relationship between the male lead and his sister would instantly crumble—wouldn't that be wonderful? Or what if the sister's first love didn't die and ended up with Vera? Wouldn't that be even more bittersweet? Anyway, both the male and female leads are likable...

To be honest, I'm really not suited to reading novels with such dark character settings. When I saw the "cuckold" tag, I was stunned. I thought the synopsis was supposed to be a heartwarming romance about a sister with a brother complex, but suddenly it's so heavy! I didn't dare read the first few chapters about the female lead's past, afraid my heart couldn't take it. Maybe I'm being too narrow-minded, but I don't really like the concept of an ex-lover. A simple revenge story would be fine, but adding an ex-lover feels like it's just to match the "cuckold" tag! It's a bit hard for me to accept! This is just my personal venting; please don't be offended if you disagree.

The story structure is simply unsolvable; the author's solid skill is something I've never seen before in science fiction. The three-line narrative method describes a series of small stories, yet they are intricately linked, weaving together a larger backdrop. In a luxurious setting, there's a lazy prince, a little girl baking bread, and a vengeful woman. Yet, it sketches a clear story: the king's illegitimate son, the deaths of his loved ones and family, and the woman's successful revenge. The writing is luxurious and fluid, with no reading obstacles, allowing you to read on in one go. The only flaw, which isn't really a fault, is that this kind of story might not be appealing to a low-brow science fiction reader, which is quite normal. This book...

The writing style is a bit exaggerated, but otherwise it's alright. It has a dark, chuunibyou (delusional) style, full of gore and perversion—a typical example of writing tragedy for the sake of tragedy. Of course, the limited updates are understandable. After reading your tragedy, I didn't feel any sadness at all; I even felt like laughing a little… Don't criticize me, there's nothing I can do about it, everyone has their own opinion. And I'm not writing this to criticize you. Ahem… Seriously though, I've read too many works with similar plots. Compared to other authors' works, your work doesn't stand out. In short, it lacks highlights and doesn't have any unique characteristics. Also…