The Demon Pact Hero's Journey to Save the World

This story is roughly about a hero so powerful he was almost titled a hero (hence the title). When he was about to perish together with the Demon King, the Demon King replaced his heart, allowing him to live as a woman. Due to feudal superstition, the protagonist, possessing dark powers, was forced to live in anonymity. Five years later, the Holy See, deeply influenced by feudal superstition, wanted to publicly try her and sacrifice her as a witch, supposedly to unite the Holy See and establish a divine kingdom on earth... I've pointed out the following issues: Issue 1: Too much narration: Too much narration leads to the following problems: Narration is when the author directly tells the reader the conclusion. Presentation, on the other hand, directly presents the described things to the reader...

Considering the readers' near-dementia-like memory, to prevent them from forgetting the plot of the previous chapter and not understanding the new one, the author dedicates half of each new chapter to recaping the ending of the previous chapter. I've read at least a hundred online novels, and I'm not exaggerating; I just want to say that among so many authors, this is the most reader-centric one I've ever seen. In this respect, this book should be on par with the Four Great Classical Novels—no, it should surpass them!! In other novels, each chapter begins with "Last time we talked about..." Followed by a few sentences summarizing the previous chapter's content, while the author...

Good grief, how long has it been and they still haven't finished revising the first chapter? Are they not planning to finish it? (I wonder if it's already been deleted?)

Please, please update the first chapter.

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When will the first chapter be ready?

Based on the synopsis, the first chapter title, and the content of the following chapters, I've made up a first chapter. A pretty awesome hero fights the Demon King, but they almost both die. The Demon King transfers his witch's heart to him. Afterwards, he changes his name to Ophelia and becomes a witch, but his allegiance is still white, I think. She returns and spends five years restoring her durability. She also adapts to her new life. Later, she celebrates her birthday with a bunch of people, including her good friend Phillitt. The two of them wrestle happily together, and she even opens a portal for Reiner, telling Augustus about it. Then the Pope, with his masterful planning, brainwashes Augustus with holy light. Yeah, that's it. Who knows what the original first chapter was about?

How long has it been since the first chapter was revised? At least give the unrevised chapters a thumbs up before it's completely finished!

No, they always revise things whenever there's a romantic scene, and the group chat is nowhere to be found. It's really discouraging. Is it because they're not signed a contract that they don't care and just leave it hanging to annoy people?

I understand the logic, so why did Xiao Mo choose the cover?