After Raising the Male Lead to Become a Savior

I really want to see the protagonist, about to lose his power, find a secluded corner at the victory celebration and silently die, looking like he's about to pass away. 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤

The current situation is that the writer I found seems to have written too much about imprisonment and other such settings. Anyway, the resulting manuscript was enjoyable for someone like me who likes morbid and obsessive characters later on. I read it all day yesterday. However, compared to the first version, it's a bit more extreme, and the settings aren't as mild. I don't know if the previous readers can accept this.

Although the book is finished, it's not really right to do nothing. Since he might have this problem, I will read the remaining chapters and then I will revise them.

I browsed the comments section and saw someone say it felt like it was written by AI, which is true. When I was reading the middle part, I mostly skimmed through it because the content and dialogue felt very artificial and nonsensical, especially the name-calling, clapping, rating, and a lot of useless dialogue. I only stopped to read carefully when I came across key content. The only thing that kept me reading was the character design. The new prologue feels better than the old one; it feels like it could be rewritten from scratch.

Judging from the prologue, is this a good ending or a normal ending? It's supposed to be a happy ending, but the female lead's health is so poor that she looks like she could die at any moment. I just don't know if it will be a normal ending or a bad ending. I don't know if the author intends to kill off the female lead or cure her through some means.

When will the old version be updated?

The new version is much better.

I was terrified. I remember it was only around 200,000 words five or six days ago, but after a few days it's over 60?

The new version has a much cleaner style, but why does it feel like the goddess has become the victim?

I haven't watched it for a few days, and there are so many updates lately. But the Sword Saint arc is getting less and less interesting; it's not as good as the Saintess arc. Maybe my imagination isn't very good, but I can't relate to those sword paths or that calamity beast at all. And the female lead's evaluation content was also a bit too much at first, but later it felt a bit tedious. It felt like the male lead didn't have any romantic relationships with any of the female characters, which felt a bit forced.