Miss, Playing Like That Is Going to Cost You Extra

The biggest problem isn't that Lillian is a villain, but that you write a lot about Lillian being about to be caught, and then suddenly at the end you say: "Hey! I, Lillian, have cheated! Aren't you angry that you can't catch me?" This kind of plot is incredibly unpopular.

There were two issues initially: the protagonist's gender wasn't explicitly stated, and it seemed to be set in a primitive society. Chapter 39 only hinted at the protagonist's past life and revealed the existence of magic, but since magic wasn't mentioned before, I initially thought it was a primitive society, which felt abrupt and lacked foreshadowing.

What is the young lady going to do?

The biggest problem with Lillian's character is that, as a villain, her scale and presence are too low, so low that she doesn't even qualify as a villain in the early stages. It's reasonable to take down this kind of villain in a couple of moves; the problem is that she's left there causing trouble and yet she doesn't die. Honestly, it's almost beneath the dignity of having the protagonist go toe-to-toe with a character like that.

Hakisaku, はprivateはずっとあなたのファンで, the first chapter of the novel, the first chapterージのから, private はあなたにくかれて, もうできますか

The plot is classic and traditional, and the villain is disgusting. Although the "vicious dog" protagonist keeps tearing things apart, there are too many disgusting scenes that ruin the mood, making it difficult to continue watching.

Uh... I know Xingyue is just doing this out of love, using a female-oriented storyline template for the early plot, but honestly, Lillian is still too annoying. How much more story is there in this phase? I feel like Lillian's ending isn't far off.

You spineless coward, how about you just update with a few hundred chapters to scare me to death?

Looks good, looks good, looks good, faster and faster updates

The NPCs were written in a rather idiotic way, and the plot was full of classic, boring tropes.