Miss Witch, This Contract's Price Doesn't Seem Right, Does It?

The opening premise is good and engaging, and the world-building is also excellent; it's not one of those idiotic or absurd stories. If it were written steadily, I think getting 10,000 favorites wouldn't be a problem. The logic and writing style are also generally fine, making it worth reading. However, the protagonist is constantly getting thwarted, either by schemes or pressures. I've read 62 chapters so far and haven't found any truly satisfying moments, even minor climaxes. It's oppressive throughout. The story supposedly involves a transformation into a more virtuous character, but after 60 chapters, there's not a single romantic subplot, not even a hint of it. This kind of forced writing isn't good. The author wants to create a grand fantasy world, an epic in their mind, and perhaps feels that it requires a gradual build-up and growth. This is indeed a good story...

Sorry guys, my stomach's acting up. I'll only make up for it with 3k today, I'll add more tomorrow.

Now that I'm on the first part of Volume 4, it's clear the author intends to create a fairly large world. However, there are quite a few flaws in the early stages. The part where the young master kills his enemy feels like a moment of impulsive anger. But it's still much better than my novel, which I spent over 100,000 words on but never finished. I'm clicking "follow" and looking forward to the author's subsequent plot developments. [Sfem:25:835]

While progressing through the main storyline is great, I'd also like to see how the romance with Fuling develops.

I was almost at the latest chapter, but it turned into a major plot hole! Oh no! [Sfem:12:536] Is it temporary or permanent?

I watched it in 3 days after hoarding it for 9 months, but it wasn't enough!

Look at Tangtang across the street, she updates 4000 words a day, and even if it's just filler, tons of people still give her votes.

Haha, you can only say they're father and daughter after all. Old Deng even said the eldest princess was stupid, but he's just as stupid. He went to kill the protagonist without understanding anything. Originally, the protagonist only saw the vampires as his employees, but now the human emperor is desperately trying to kill him, and the vampires are sacrificing a grand duke for him, pushing the protagonist towards the vampires' side.

Only two chapters today, please don't wait!

Strange, author, why are you slacking off? [Sfem:7:429][sfem:7:429]