Yandere Caretaking: My Symbiotic Dependence with the Student Council

Now, are old books the only ones left to read and reminisce about?

When you're looking for something to read, just browse through your friends' favorites; they're all seasoned readers.

It's not just your writing style that's declined; the plot feels weaker too. I feel I need to write a review to criticize you.

Why can't it be 10 chapters a day?

Let's start with the strengths. The character descriptions in this book are excellent. Like the previous book, it's suitable for readers who enjoy extreme, yandere/obsessive content. The author's writing style remains consistent throughout, effectively portraying the twisted and inhuman nature of the female protagonists, such as Nail's masochistic tendencies, the student council president's treating the male protagonist like a plaything, Mio's possessiveness towards her brother, and the love between the saintess and the upperclassman for Rilo. The author's depiction of these characters' "illness" is flawless. Then there's the author's unique writing style, a blend of Japanese light novel and Chinese web novel elements...

The student council president remains shrouded in mystery; Neil, suffering from self-destructive tendencies due to childhood trauma; Mio, caught between appetite and love; Hao, questioning her own identity; and Wu Tina, who lacked love since childhood… Each female protagonist in this book has a distinct personality and her own major ailment (laughs), demonstrating the author's writing skill and conception. The male protagonist, a man whose spirit is dead, seeks redemption step by step through revenge, and on his path to redemption, he will also guide the female protagonists (perhaps making their ailments even more severe?). The current 100,000-odd words are a good foundation; judging from the world-building and plot progression of this work, it should easily reach a million words…

The comments section is full of people saying it's not as good as "Yandere God," haha, it really is not as good, okay, just kidding. Back to the book review, let me talk about what I personally consider its shortcomings (friendly discussion welcome): 1. The romantic subplot is not well-developed. While yandere emotions are irrational and pure, they are inherently quite intense and complex. Take, for example, the character with the clearest emotions in the book so far. Tina wants something very pure—someone who loves her. So when she sees Rilo, whom she can freely express and embellish with love (besides revenge), she irrationally clings to him. But love itself is too complex. Tina wants Rilo's body, Rilo's reliance in revenge, and everything else...

After a year of nurturing, it's time to start watching.

I've been following your work since "The God of Illness," and it's obvious your writing has declined, but I'll still support you. I just might not subscribe for several days at a time. I just hope you can regain your writing skills so I can come back to read your work.

The author's writing style has declined; it doesn't feel as good as the earlier volumes of "The Sick God".