Regretting It? But I've Already Fallen for Your Arch-Enemy

This is a classic case of digging your own grave. You wrote so much melancholy and resentment in the beginning, but then you tried to revise it later, and it came out incredibly awkward (like the car wheels were practically sparking before you remembered to hit the brakes). Also, the worst thing you can do in a novel is have a masculine male lead. It's not that he has to get to base so quickly, but if you don't want the relationship to develop so fast, then reduce the amount of content related to getting to base. Failing to get to base twice already—that's not masculinity anymore, that's a complete shriveling!

They all seem so abstract, one after another. The kingdom's citizens and NPCs just keep repeating the same few abstract phrases. The hero is even more abstract, as are the male and female protagonists. It's like there's no one left to talk to! 😂

This book is basically a copy of Hedgehog's "After Being Forced to Step Down, the Once-Annoying Nun Elopeed with Me".

Now I understand why this book was criticized. It keeps rehashing related plot points without developing the male protagonist's betrayal story. If you don't expand on the story, who will sympathize with the male protagonist? Who will understand the hatred of an abstract person towards the female protagonist? They'll just think Yang Wei (the author) is arrogant and unscrupulous.

If the female lead doesn't get to sleep with me, then author, let me sleep with you!

The story is quite original, and the beginning was decent, but the later parts became incredibly awkward. It felt like they were just throwing in jokes for the sake of joking, and the cringeworthy moments really ruined the viewing experience. Also, the repetitive, overused plot about how the empire's people regretted their betrayal and desperately wanted the female lead back was just plain stupid.

Your writing hasn't improved over these few books; in fact, it's become increasingly nonsensical. I can accept the mix of stale and tired tropes, but does this plot even match your writing style? After reading over forty chapters, I really can't accept it. I'm not trying to give you any guidance, but I hope you'll learn from this experience and write a proper outline before deciding on the writing style for your next book.

Dear author, you can just write whatever you want. The current online environment is very toxic, and many readers are just looking for entertainment without caring about the story's background or setting. Writing the story you want to write is the most important thing.

If you really can't write about political power, try to avoid writing about it as much as possible. The female lead's character is too contradictory.

I don't think the male lead was inherently abstract. The fact that the female lead, after being with him, thinks, "How come I never knew he was so abstract?" Suggests that his abstraction is mostly due to two reasons: firstly, the immense pressure of living in a constantly dangerous alternate world; and secondly, anyone would become abstract after being betrayed by their best friend of over a decade for another man. Imagine your best friend's personality changes, he falls in love with another man, and then stabs you in the back for that man. It's a miracle if a normal person doesn't go insane in that situation. Some people, with an omniscient perspective, think the female lead is innocent. I just don't understand...