Hero, I'm Really Not Your Wife!

I'm just offering a suggestion. I'm not a writer, but I'm worried the author might end up writing something that violates civic morality and values. The author should quickly increase the male lead's plot, and ideally, shouldn't drastically reduce Lorraine's storyline (the disappearance of such a character is too abrupt). Don't let the author get confused and create a situation where Lorraine acts like a doting mother. As both son and apprentice, Lorraine should develop a relationship while maintaining distance. Maintaining distance is crucial; minimize physical contact, no touching or hugging. The female lead should be portrayed more as an elder. This applies to both Kevin as the mentor and the female lead...

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It was a very enjoyable read. Kevin truly captured the essence of a 112-year-old kingdom guardian. As a time traveler, despite his advanced age, he retained youthful vitality. At the same time, he was calm and composed, aware of the differences between himself and a real woman. Unlike many other "marriage-transfer" novels where the female lead quickly gives herself away, I think Kevin's decision to accept his family in the end is perfectly reasonable. And if Gary's wife is truly a part of Kevin, how happy Gary would be to learn the truth! The author's writing made me feel that the female lead is a person with her own will; she can have her own life instead of being bound to the male lead. I think this is excellent, providing...

The beginning was plagiarized, so I sent it directly.

Dear readers, I've been quite busy lately, so I'll be taking a day off.

Your opening is truly indescribable. The character dialogue reads like it's being recited, devoid of any emotion. Why does the character, who could easily retrieve the wine remotely using magic, teleport right in front of the male lead to get it, as if afraid he wouldn't notice? Chapter 5 mentions that spatial jumps consume a lot of magic and are difficult to replenish. Why didn't you walk to get the wine instead of using spatial jumps? Are you really that short of magic power at level ten? Can't replenish magic power because you're not familiar with your meridians after the transformation?

The title, "I'm Not Your Wife," is catchy and enticing, a great idea and a good starting point for the plot. However, the story almost immediately skips this part, focusing mostly on the three-year promise referenced in the title, rendering the title and synopsis's appeal ineffective. While a humorous rewrite of an old-school web novel might not be a bad idea, the author's writing skills (both in style, character development, and narrative coherence) are insufficient to execute this otherwise decent idea well. I believe the author will improve with more time.

I'm really sorry I have no inspiration and can't write anything.

If you ask me what the female lead looks like, I can only say she's absolutely stunning.