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I study history, and this is the Imperial Uncle.

I don't recommend reading it. The later parts are extremely padded; you can only read the chapters by looking at the titles. Each chapter has hundreds or thousands of words, which is equivalent to just one sentence in the title.

It's obvious I'm running out of inspiration, and my focus isn't really on the novel. Also, the second girlfriend is clearly following a tired, overused female-oriented formula. Did I forget about her when I was writing the story? Her appearance feels rushed. The fact that she's at the Mahayana stage is definitely meant to show that the story won't end there. If you want to lengthen the story, put in the effort to build up the groundwork properly, instead of just writing something hastily when you have free time. People read novels for their fresh premise; writing a rambling, disjointed narrative is unacceptable.

How did the little dragon turn into a mature woman?

It's almost finished, but it feels like there's still a lot of material that's completely wasted in the second half. It's like they introduced a technological cultivation theme, but it didn't expand on it at all. The Lin family's characters completely disappear; she was admitted to university, but there's almost no campus description. Her high school friend, Lin Haipeng, also felt like he deserved some attention. It seems like they could have used a deceptive method to limit power inflation and help her navigate the world of the broken gods. Hopefully, the author's next book will be better.

It's getting a bit boring. I was hoping for some interesting plot developments since it's almost Chinese New Year, but it's just so-so? And then there's the disappearing act, Sadako, what's wrong with you?

You've used all these excuses to death: playing pie, playing mahjong, going to the amusement park with your girlfriend, arguing, taking a break. You don't even want to have perfect attendance; you just procrastinate.

Can I ask who you all identify with when you read books? Is there any hope for someone like me who automatically identifies with Xiao Xianyu?

Who is the first wife?

It currently feels somewhat reminiscent of that cultivation novel, but it's also purely a wish-fulfillment story. To put it simply, if it wanted a more engaging plot, it should have slowed down the pace and focused on character development; if it's a wish-fulfillment story, it should have sped up the pace and highlighted a few main characters. Right now, it feels a bit like a hybrid. For example, around chapters 20-30, it introduced many modern and cultivation world characters, spending a lot of time on supporting characters, while the main characters and female lead received less attention. If it plans to focus on these characters later, that's fine; some foreshadowing can be tolerated. But currently, it's clearly intended to be written very quickly. Is it even necessary for these supporting characters to appear?...