I Want to Become a Hero in an Ordinary World

This book's performance is absolutely terrible... Although I anticipated it would turn out like this after the first month, I still didn't expect it to be this bad. Basically, no one is reading the later chapters anymore. Sitting in front of the computer looking at the manuscript, I just feel a sharp pain in my heart. I can't write a single word; I'm filled with a sense of oppression. I don't know what I'm even trying to achieve. I also can't seem to get started on the new book. See you later.

In magical girl stories where the official magic association factions dominate, this is the only "wild" magical girl.

I finished reading the chapters I'd been saving up, and this protagonist just keeps playing the villain. Can't he just have a normal conversation with the police? He's barely surviving; even being a mercenary would be better than scavenging. Besides, with the learning environment and conditions so terrible, why is he still in school? He could be wasting his time collecting cardboard to improve his living conditions.

My sleep schedule was completely messed up yesterday... I'm not feeling well, so I won't be able to post the third update for today... I'm very sorry.

Making things seem tragic for the sake of making things tragic; instead of resolving the issue with a few words, they insist on letting the patient recover for a few months first.

It would be better if the male body died suddenly, and he could live on as a magical girl. The male body is worse than a pig or a dog.

The protagonist is so capable yet he's in such a sorry state. Logically, even if he didn't go through with his "non-beef" act, he could at least have retaliated against the person who secretly filmed him and demanded some money. Secretly leaking his pearls really showed he couldn't hold back. The protagonist goes to school but doesn't pay attention in class, insisting on going to school only to be looked down upon. Since he's already homeless and doesn't want to study, it doesn't really matter whether he goes to school or not.

Waaah, it's good to vent a little!

Author, you've already maxed out your writing and you still expect people to read it? Dream on! You wrote at least 50+ chapters just for a trip to an amusement park, huh? If you don't flop, who will?

I don't object to characters having tragic backstories, but writing about tragedy just for the sake of it is terrible. The tragedy of life needs to be emotionally resonantly portrayed, not just dry, lifeless conditions. You've put the cart before the horse.