Am I the Heroine of an Adult Game? For Real?

Honestly, the story style changes drastically between the beginning and end. It feels like the earlier parts are a trap, designed to trick the reader into absorbing the later content. The transitions between reality and dreams in the later parts are also very confusing. The plot development is quite unpredictable, and the protagonist's character changes feel inexplicable. Initially, although his actions were passive, his thoughts were at least lively and humorous. Then he suddenly goes insane and degenerates. It's supposedly an act, a system overplaying its role, but to maintain a sense of oppression, the protagonist's true thoughts are rarely depicted; when they are, they're mostly just swearing and acting like a madman. The excessive description of his insane language and actions makes it seem like these mad words and actions are the protagonist's true psychology...

Does the visible water mean that every few steps the protagonist takes should be described in a whole chapter? Even if detailed descriptions are to be used, they should be reserved for the more engaging parts of the conflict between the protagonist and the female lead. The protagonist has been offline for two chapters, and it'll probably be another two chapters before she returns. They've already switched to updating once a day; if they don't make the chapters longer and the plot more compact, how can they expect readers to keep reading? It's been a long time since I've had a chance to read this.

Happy New Year, meow! I'm taking a break today, and will resume my regular double-update schedule tomorrow.

First, let's talk about the latest chapters. October 17th, 117 chapters updated, 116 subscribed. I took a break and came back to catch up, and the result? I have to rant about the two biggest and newest plot holes: First, Su Yue was tricked into thinking they were three sisters when she opened the box, but after meeting them, she never questioned it again; second, they fabricated such a severe mental illness, then suddenly they force a scene where the whole family is acting out a treatment, and that's it? Who do they think is stupid? You yourself have suffered from mental illness, though not as severely as some people. What's it like to have mental illness? What kind of atmosphere would a family with one person suffering from mental illness have...?

This is my first time writing a book review, so I'm not very good at it _(:з"∠)_ The author connects the illusory game and reality through the protagonist's changes, blurring the line between illusion and reality. Then, the protagonist himself has a sense of escaping reality, using making money as an excuse to satisfy his morbid obsession, fooling everyone around him, including himself, believing he hasn't fallen into the mire, but in reality, he's trapped in his own web (the trash talk he says to his sister after escaping the dream is truly brilliant, perfectly showcasing the protagonist's self-deception and brokenness). As for the Yueyue sisters, frankly, they're two psychopaths among psychopaths, one openly venting...

The writing is finished but the reader feels it's unfinished; the second volume has a lot of plot holes left unfilled, and the original harem story has turned into a pure love story. The first volume was truly amazing, but the second volume felt like it had no outline at all.

I promised to update three times a day in November, but I've been feeling unwell, so I've only managed one or two updates a day. I owe so many updates; it's about time I dressed up as a woman and apologized.

The book probably ended abruptly because of poor sales. The plot and descriptions in the first volume were nowhere near as good as the second. It seems the author got a little carried away by the success of the first volume. Hopefully, they'll learn from this experience when they start a new book.

Is that all? The plot doesn't explain Yu Meng's conspiracy at all. Emotionally, Su Ya and Lin Wanwan's mess remains unresolved. The writing is finished but the reader is like an eunuch.

The author's ideas are excellent and interesting. However, the reader needs to understand the author's thought process. A novel written from the protagonist's first-person perspective was so confusing that I couldn't understand what the protagonist was thinking on my first read. Add to that the multiple storylines and random little scenes, and the reading experience from pages 29-50 was a mess. It was filled with questions like, "What is the protagonist doing? Why is the protagonist doing this? What did this person do to offend the protagonist?" In the end, my first conclusion was that the protagonist must be crazy, why is he tormenting that little girl with Yu Yu syndrome?