Can't a Ragdoll Catgirl Save the World?

To be honest, after reading over 50 chapters in one day, firstly, the pacing was too slow, and secondly, there was too much unnecessary plot, making the story feel too long. Everything else was excellent, especially the pure romance feel. Author, I feel you're better suited to writing slice-of-life stories, really, especially those with everyday moments like snuggling together.

Why am I writing about Cicero again? Does this have anything to do with the main storyline? Is it even taking up space that's supposed to be part of the main story? If all else fails, you can write it in a side story; writing it like this is too abrupt.

Oh dear, I bought all my shares in Sophia, why haven't I seen my little cutie for so long? 😭😭😭

When will Sofia return, and when will the Red Dragon return to the track?

There's basically no main storyline left.

The plot and the eroticism were both great, but why did Cicero, a minor character, get so much screen time?

The beginning is alright, but getting captured by a succubus is a disaster. I suggest dropping the book after you get to the part where you get captured.

It's so good, it's just that the author is so unreliable.

I want to see Sofia give Amy a good dressing down 😡, author, can you hear me?

Well written