The Girlfriend Who Was Reborn Alongside Me

I've finished reading it. Come on, author, tell me, is this even considered yandere?!

This time, it features a morbidly brother-obsessed protagonist and his girlfriend (?). The story begins with the protagonist being forced to start over, vowing to change a certain part of history. So far, only the older sister has appeared, and as the title suggests, she's already a complete brother-obsessed character. I'm really looking forward to seeing what kind of sister the author will portray and what kind of twisted girlfriend she will become. The chapter illustrations also quickly draw the reader in. Overall, it's pretty good. If you like erotic novels, you shouldn't be too disappointed!

Actually, when I first saw this book, what attracted me most wasn't the prologue but rather some random musings at the beginning. To be honest, the start didn't have anything that would immediately draw you in. Frankly, I didn't see anything particularly outstanding in the book, and I wasn't too satisfied with the world setting. It's full of petty thugs at the beginning… I just want to ask, how old was the protagonist back then? Are all the thugs in this world brainless lunatics? And if life were really this chaotic, then the government would be in a period of turmoil…

After reading the first few chapters, I thought this was a story about a sister complex, but after seeing the title and synopsis... I think I understand now.

Seriously, the writing is good, readable, but the common sense is terribly lacking: in the latest chapters, there's no back door in the main hall? Are you kidding me? Take the Forbidden City, does its main hall only have one door? Furthermore, even if there is only one door, knowingly rushing forward to certain death—what do they take people for? It's like someone in a robbery knowing that moving will lead to death but still moving anyway—idiotic! Finally, regarding the protagonist's fight with the arms dealer, I must say that the protagonist couldn't have performed those moves at that time. So-called expert fights rely mainly on muscle memory; knowledge alone isn't enough for the body to react. Novels aren't just for entertainment; connecting them to reality is very important...

Overall, it's pretty good and quite interesting. The characters' attributes satisfy many people's interests, lol. Regarding magic, I'm new to the series and haven't paid much attention yet; the author might not have elaborated on it, but it will likely be expanded upon later. At this rate, the older sister and Elvi are bound to clash. With Ouyang's harem, I sense a potential battleground. Personally, I just don't really want Ouyang to become a mercenary again and encounter Leo again. Well, I'm really looking forward to seeing how things develop—who will ultimately win? I personally support the older sister; draw your sword!

The male lead's abilities are described too little, while other characters are described in excessive detail. The protagonist is constantly overshadowed by minor characters, making it feel like the male lead's weakness is sacrificed to highlight the personalities of other characters, causing many readers to drop the story. Aside from early spoilers about the male lead, he becomes practically useless later on. Many people persisted until the end hoping to see him show off, but he never actually did. Personally, I feel this is a story with a weak protagonist, mediocre plot, a good but difficult-to-understand premise, and the protagonist relying entirely on luck.

This book is now complete, and the final chapter has been uploaded! Thank you all for your support! My new book will be released in a few days, so please continue to support it!!

After reading the first chapter, I felt the overall atmosphere was a bit serious, not the lighthearted harem novel I had imagined. Also, I felt the male protagonist might repeatedly face the tragedy of death, reminding me of a novel I read before where it was only at the end that it turned out all the male protagonist's experiences were a script written by another completely invincible person. If that's the case, I find it a bit hard to accept. I hope to see the development of the romance in later episodes, and given the common trope in yandere novels, I hope the author will lay the groundwork for the yandere traits of each female lead. Overall, I felt the author's writing style and scene descriptions were very well done, in my opinion...

Anyone back to sweep the graves? Could you tell me? I saw someone say Field got together with a lesbian later on, who was she with? I actually quite liked the interactions between the male lead and her earlier.