Reborn into the Life of Date A Live

Please don't stop updating, author! No matter what others say, I really love this work!

The earlier plot was good, but the battle scenes lacked a sense of dynamism, and the dialogue between characters during battles felt somewhat stiff. With more effort put into the battle sequences, it would be much better. Miyako and her alternate personality are well-developed characters, but the transitions between them feel somewhat lacking. I hope the author addresses this. Also, Ren from DEM is portrayed as too weak, and Itsuka Shido's personality deviates somewhat from the original work. Miyako's personality remains somewhat vague, lacking development through external events or her own character, which fails to generate much reader interest.

If you can imitate, it means you're capable. Writing novels isn't easy for us middle school students either! It puts a bit of pressure on you. All you do is stand by and criticize. If your work were criticized, would you feel good? If you didn't imitate, how many works could you write these days? It's easy for you to talk when you're not in my shoes. Show some respect to the authors, okay?

The pronunciation of the English in the first picture is: "Little girl, are you kidding me?" The male protagonist's reply is: "No, I'll be serious."

Seeing all the negative comments saying I wrote a sloppy post... I'm truly sorry... Please forgive my past immaturity and ignorance...

You've already taken several photos just for the introduction.

Right, Naxi? Thumbs up! 👍

Speaking of the author, it's been almost a month since your other book was last updated, hasn't it?

How many descriptions are needed to justify this setup? Many masterpieces rely on supporting characters to elevate the protagonist. With seven or eight different protagonist forms and a bunch of minor details, the entire book loses its supposed fighting spirit and sense of salvation; it might as well have been a romance novel. It does manage to satisfy a small portion of the reader, and some of the rewriting is quite effective. That aspect is still decent.

This isn't the first time I've posted a book review; I've tried three times already, but I kept accidentally clicking away (qaq). This time, I'm determined to type it on my computer. First of all, I'm sorry, author, I really can't give this novel a very high score, even though our author is innocent, lively, kind, and friendly... (Just kidding, please don't mind). As a bookworm with over six years of experience (really), the key points for evaluating a novel are as follows: theme, reading experience (writing style), plot excitement, and writing style. A detailed analysis follows:...