The Witch with a Marriage Contract Is Definitely Not My Little Sister's Teacher

I want to nurture the book, but I'm afraid it will die out in the current state. All I can say is, good luck to the author!

Author, you should probably revise the synopsis. At least add the Judgment Witch; otherwise, it's easy to be misled by the synopsis into thinking the pure love interest is the younger sister.

I saw it at Yangshizi, so I came back to sweep the tomb.

Minor fodder~ Short and weak~ Minor fodder~ Soft and limp~ Minor fodder~ I finished reading a month's worth of writing in one night~ Minor fodder~ Minor fodder~~

Honestly, this synopsis really needs changing. If you're going to write about pure love, you should clearly state it in the synopsis. People who like harem stories are tricked into reading it, pay to watch the later parts, and then suddenly it's changed. Frankly, it's a bit disgusting. Plus, the female lead is only mentioned briefly, making it hard to maintain the synopsis.

I think the plot needs to be revised. The Judgment Witch has too little screen time. Most readers, like me, probably don't feel much for her; the Cursed Witch has more. Changing the love interest to the younger sister would be better, or even the Cursed Witch could do it, but the Judgment Witch... Sorry, I'm really not familiar with her.

It's already 260,000 words, and the Judgment Witch has only said a few lines. What kind of pure romance story doesn't even have any characters? What's the difference between this and being single? The vast majority of the other romantic storylines involve the younger sister. Are you planning to have the Judgment Witch die and possess the younger sister for a pure romance?

Tomb sweeping (•ᴗ•)🌱 P. S.: To those who come after, the author has moved to Taobao, but it's still under the same name.

Honestly, author, the groundwork you laid in the beginning of this book has left you with only one path: pure romance. There's no other choice. The problem lies in the fact that your synopsis, the character development, and what you're trying to write now are completely contradictory—that's the main contradiction. Either you go with the current trend and change the other female lead to a younger sister, or you revise the synopsis, add a separate chapter at the beginning to avoid triggering any issues, and then accelerate the romance later on (at least don't leave it with zero foundation or even conflict).

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