For My Little Sister, I Was Forced to Become the Saintess of Profound Ice

... Is the author always late to the end? Can't he just finish writing every book?

It would be even better if it were lilies.

I hope this book isn't about marriage; being single is best, or even just an orange (a euphemism for an orange). A single-person story won't deter too many readers. The author's other book might have deterred some readers, but of course, if you don't care, you can ignore it.

The use of honorifics and archaic language is too verbose. Novels are primarily about plot; descriptions should serve the plot, not become lengthy and tedious.

I have a small suggestion. Honestly, after reading this far, I feel the author is missing the point. For example, in the scene where the inner demon confronts the protagonist, frankly, I didn't really care about the inner demon's experiences and feelings. The inner demon's despair in the face of the protagonist was used to highlight the protagonist's strength. I wasn't really interested in too much about the inner demon, and the content felt rather redundant.

The pacing is off. The earlier scenes, which should have been about leveling up and fighting monsters, were stolen by Song Bingyao. So far, the impression is: the master is helping her with power-ups, the afterimage is helping her with power-ups, and now she's dying and disappearing to use power-ups again. Using power-ups from a distance is fine, but the frequent power-ups and stuns are too abstract. She's like Song Bingyao's tool, an old man who cleans up her messes when she can't win, then goes to sleep, not stealing any of Song Bingyao's screen time.

The title mentions the younger sister, but so far, she hasn't had a single major role.

To be honest, by the time I was halfway through, I had already forgotten the main character's name. The main character's presence was so weak!

When does the author plan to return?

The younger sister has very few scenes.