Reincarnated as a Corrupted Black Dragon Princess, Heroine, Please Leave

I've seen everyone's comments, and I'll explain at the end of the next chapter.

You've dragged this out for too long. We were drawn in by your title to see yandere characters, but after reading for ages, we're left with nothing. It's never too late to mend things. Writing isn't easy. The book next door, *Silver Flower*, had a plot hole in the middle, but it's doing well now. Just follow the normal plan, but speed up that plot hole a bit. Otherwise, it doesn't fit the theme; you're focusing on connecting the dots while neglecting the main storyline. Good luck, Fantasy-chan!

Fantasy, you're updating way too slowly! I'm unlikely to catch up with you at the same pace.

He didn't show any yandere traits; instead, he seems like a harem guy now.

I'm waiting for a yandere, what are you waiting for?

Another one died... But the overall impression is similar. I haven't written the content I want to see yet, and I haven't even put it on the track, which is why I started raising them.

This book was so painful to read. From beginning to end, it felt like a relationship built on moral and emotional blackmail, more like a situation where if you don't date me, someone will kill your whole family. If it's supposed to be a 1v1 pure love story, why did they have to include a tragic character like Sophie who falls for the protagonist? And the protagonist himself seems to have a kind of schizophrenic disorder.

Surely we don't have to keep reminiscing, right? We don't want this kind of thing.

I had just read a few chapters and was thinking, "Why does this writing style sound so familiar?" Then I realized it was fantasy, by the author of that novel about a dark, beautiful girl. It was the first book I read after joining Pineapple Bun, and the yandere character she portrayed left a very deep impression on me.

I feel the transformation trope is somewhat unnecessary. Removing it wouldn't affect anything, and it might even make the movie look better. Thinking about the transformation trope always feels a bit off.