How Could I, the Final Boss, Possibly Be a Little Girl?

Having read novels for 10 years, I've come to hate three types of plots the most: mindless wish fulfillment, NTR (Netorare), and forced stupidity. Elsa was originally portrayed reasonably well—lively, cute, and a little clever, with good manners as a duke's daughter. After experiencing so much, she also understood some social niceties. But to advance the plot, she was simply made an idiot. She fooled multiple guards to go out and play, and the guards themselves acted like idiots. There's a war on the front lines; why would the Demon King send them? And even if it's real, stopping her would cause trouble, but what if it's fake? Letting her go wouldn't lead to the same result, would it? And this is just...

While the writing style isn't top-tier, it's certainly a comfortable read. The cast is relatively small, and the relationships are easily understood, which is crucial. Many novels introduce a multitude of characters suddenly at the beginning or middle, often with heavy foreshadowing, which, while adding literary flair, significantly increases the reading difficulty. This is actually detrimental to the novel. The use of numerous witty remarks and jokes keeps the reader engaged and creates a sense of connection. However, this also results in the slice-of-life scenes feeling overly drawn out, and the early plot progresses too slowly—something to be mindful of. ...

Although I've told you this many times in private, I still have to say it: don't just read your favorite yuri (girls' love) novels. Also, watch more romance novels, or action novels, anime, or movies. And some games too. Some scenes in romance novels can be incredibly moving, and with action novels, you need to watch them to understand how to write battle scenes. Also, learn more about historical literature. It will greatly benefit your writing; otherwise, you won't be able to write a good main storyline.

It's quite obvious that they rushed to finish the story and then rushed to a quick conclusion, but at least it wasn't abandoned, right?

Overall, this book is alright, but if I had to nitpick, the plot is a bit dragging. The beginning took too long. I estimate it will take at least two or three long chapters for the protagonist to leave the Demon King's castle, similar to the previous book. Overall, it's still acceptable and worth following at a leisurely pace. Actually, I'm quite curious about what surprises the author will bring with the foreshadowing. Anyway, I'm definitely going to see Shibel leave the Demon King's castle – *winks*. Well, keep it up! I hope this book continues to be a success.

It took me over an hour to realize that the protagonist is a succubus. Why is the cover a fox?

(Let's start with the bad, then the good.) Overall, the author writes very well, the pace is slow, and the emotions are handled well, but the writing style needs more practice. After reading the current chapters, (I almost choked on my own blood) this story is addictive. While it's not purely angsty, the various environments create a sense of oppression, making the daily life depicted less normal. It feels like a prison story, where no one can be trusted. The daily life is written in a relatively lighthearted way, but the thought of the protagonist being in prison makes it hard to relax. To describe it, he's captured by a group of complete strangers and learns he's about to be captured in the desert, but before he dies...

I initially came for the white-haired cover, but after reading two chapters I realized it was a cover scam (it seems like there are a lot of these kinds of books, no, it feels like they're everywhere, oh well, whatever). But, but, this pink-haired loli uke is really super—kawaii =￣ω￣=, so I selectively ignored the cover issue (by the way, isn't the pink-haired succubus heroine that one? ( •̀∀•́ ) I'm fine). So far there haven't been any particularly large-scale battles, but the slice-of-life scenes are really good, especially the imprisonment scenes, which reminded me of the previous Kantai Collection event. To be honest, I was initially reluctant, but she was...

Sweeping tombs, sweeping tombs... Kids like the author who haven't updated in a while should be rambling on about gay stuff in the cold night.

I recently saw this book recommended on my bookshelf and ended up reading it in one go. Actually, my understanding of it is quite limited, but today I can't help but offer a brief summary. As usual, this is my personal opinion, contains spoilers, so proceed with caution. ... Let's start with the "work of heart." To be honest, the book has some flaws in the early stages, as previous readers have discussed, so I won't elaborate further. However, the author demonstrates his attitude throughout—he consciously made changes and remedial measures, such as placing a complete and detailed update of character information at the beginning, and explaining Elsa's behavior in the second chapter, attempting to salvage the situation. ...