How Can I Get Stronger When I'm Frail from the Start!

This is my first time writing a long review, and I had to get it off my chest. Please forgive any mistakes. First of all, the plot's inconsistencies are particularly serious. For example, during the conquest of the kingdom, I don't understand the point of Xingyu Kingdom's actions. Demanding land division and marriage alliances—what was the purpose? I was completely baffled. Given the vast difference in strength between the two countries, what was the point of these actions? Why did the King of Qin use these tactics when conquering the six kingdoms? Wasn't it to prevent the other smaller states from uniting against him? Since there was no such fear or constraint, why was there any need to divide land? Why was there any need for negotiations? This is just one example...

I lay in bed for a while, getting angrier and angrier. I read chapter 41. When I read the synopsis, I thought I was going to be dealing with a beautiful girl's lovey-dovey relationship. The embryonic scenes were a bit awkward at first, but it didn't really affect the overall feeling of the beautiful girl's lovey-dovey relationship. The heroine's isolation was also acceptable, since it was all for the sake of a better future for the beautiful girl's lovey-dovey relationship. But then things started to get really weird. The heroine going out for a stroll and being seen by a thug is a classic trope, but what's with the entire palace being deserted? Did they all go to see the enemy prince? Apparently, there are only three princesses who haven't seen a prince, and the guards have all gone to broaden their horizons, right? But the author says the logic...

To be fair, novels with a cultivation world setting and a salvation theme like this are actually quite common. So, if the author wants to become popular, they can only focus on improving their writing style or plot. But frankly, I don't think the author has any advantage in either area. First, let me clarify that the following is merely my personal opinion and I have no intention of disparaging anyone. Let's talk about the author's writing style. My assessment is that it's acceptable. It's not as good as some exceptionally good ones, but it's definitely readable, at least not nauseating. It's also clear that the author put a lot of effort into it; I found almost no typos, and the update speed is also...

This is my first book review, and I have a rather long post to make. The writing is decent, but the author seems to have a bit of a delusional twist. Considering it's a light novel, it's okay to be a bit nitpicky. I don't mean to criticize the author, just hope he can improve. First, regarding the war scenes: the author wrote that 20,000 men fought for a year, and 100,000 men fought for two and a half years. After two territorial concessions, they then negotiated the cession of one-tenth of the Western Regions. This shows that the protagonist's country wasn't too small. An empire is definitely surrounded by more than one other country. Why did the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods remain ununified for so long? When there's a powerful neighboring country...

First, the plot drags on too much. Second, the two older sisters are supposed to be quite strong, but in the story... Well, it's frustrating to watch.

Speaking of the Hundred Immortals Sect's deputy sect leader, doesn't he care about the empire at all? Isn't he afraid that if something happens to the empire, his two older sisters will suffer damage to their Dao hearts or develop inner demons?

This is quite interesting. Reading your reader guidelines was an eye-opener. On one hand, you seem to think you're just earning pocket money and don't care, while on the other hand, you think your work is incredibly great, and everyone can't live without your book? Did you come to Pineapple Bun to teach us how to read a book? Are you trying to blackmail readers with the plot? You think you can be lenient, but you're someone who writes to make money. If you can't tolerate those who make money from it, why should we, who pay to read it, tolerate you? What you're trying to say is that if we don't like it, we shouldn't read it. If we put ourselves in your shoes, I'd think if you can't stand being criticized, you shouldn't write. There are so many writers; does everyone who can swear come here...?

Short and weak, I curse the author to be neither the top nor the bottom, and to be unable to cut.

It made me sore in the middle of the night.

To be honest, the early plot was a bit weak. Also, the way the female lead and her sister went from disliking each other to liking each other because of a promise, guilt, and tea-making felt a bit forced (although this can't be changed, I still think it's worth mentioning). Was the female lead's time travel and amnesia necessary? What was the difference between her personality before and after the amnesia? At most, she became more childlike after the amnesia, so it would have been better to remove the time travel part. And how did the second sister know she was in a brothel… there was no foreshadowing at all. The world-building was grand, but the empire was placed at the smallest level. I feel like if both daughters went to the number one cultivation place to become true disciples, and word spread both domestically and internationally, someone would dare to slaughter them…