Why Are You All Hiding This from Me?

The author's writing is absolutely commendable. I've seen many novels where I write a review based on a single character for the first time, but I still want to say something. This older sister's personality is somewhat annoying. Upon hearing that she's her brother's girlfriend, her first reaction is to accuse him of cheating on her? She calls her brother a scumbag, but that's only because she suspects he's playing R18 games. So, playing R18 games makes someone a scumbag...? This "good" older sister is more or less the scumbag. She clearly doesn't want her sister to have a relationship with the protagonist. After all, I've never seen a "good" older sister who would cheat on her brother and stand by and do nothing while her brother is being bullied. At this point, some people might object, like the older sister...

The older sister's character is terrible, from the very beginning, and it's hard to explain. The organization led by the protagonist's father is likely an official organization; considering the novel's setting, it's definitely a military force. Is it reasonable for the protagonist's father to dedicate a large portion of his personnel to a military base just to investigate who injured him? Is this something a leader should do? In reality, this would only result in dismissal and accountability. This is barely acceptable, since many novels are written this way; although unrealistic, it's still readable if you don't overthink it. The older sister's character is just too outrageous, disgusting me, and I don't want to elaborate.

Honestly, the protagonist's sister is acting like she's mentally ill. She's not a pervert herself, yet she has the nerve to criticize her brother. It's so hypocritical. I'm speechless.

When I first saw the author say in the group that they might not update anymore, I thought they were joking. Later, after the author clarified, my first reaction was one of deep regret. The author's writing is truly excellent, and it's such a shame to stop updating. However, due to family reasons (I won't elaborate, as it's a private matter), there's nothing I can do. I'm just an unemployed "social outcast" (my group ID is "Ice Cream," as those who know me know; I'm basically always in the group, the kind who might appear at any time). So, I don't have much money to give as a reward, since I don't have a job right now. Sigh, enough rambling...

Hello, author and readers! I have a scary story to tell: Starting today, you can find my avatar in every comment of every chapter! Emmm… To be honest, this is quite sudden. Until yesterday, I was still preparing for today's midterm exam, and then suddenly I heard I was going to have to stop updating… Ha, I've been thinking about this all day, and my Chinese exam was a disaster. Then last night I checked, wow, the author can still update for another month! So I started writing comments, time lost, phone screen went black twice. No…

Initially, the plot attracted me; I'm a loyal fan of the "Pineapple Bun Transformation" series. While the writing was a bit disjointed at first, it wasn't a big deal. However, the more I read, the more uncomfortable I felt (not referring to the writing style). The protagonist's sister only wanted to cheat on him (even though it was the protagonist himself), which personally bothered me. After all, they're family; even if you don't like them, you shouldn't scheme against your own brother like that. Secondly, the teacher, while having desires for the protagonist, found excuses to approach him, but later, after learning his girlfriend (who was actually a woman) could also heal his injuries, he planned to get her, essentially trying to steal her away. Perhaps because it was all the protagonist's fault, it wasn't too bad...

Once the other book is released, this one will probably be updated.

The author certainly has a knack for infuriating people. Even after putting aside most of my brain, looking at this setting and content again... I'm still quite angry.

"I'm sorry, sister, I am Bai Linglong." Bai Luofeng transformed back into the Cocoa-like Bai Linglong, causing Bai Qinxue's mind to go blank for a moment. The younger brother she had always looked down upon was actually her beloved Bai Linglong; the clown was herself. "Sister, I lied to you. I'm not your biological brother. I'll leave now." Tears streamed down Bai Luofeng's face, falling to the floor, piercing Bai Qinxue's heart. Heartbroken, she hugged Bai Luofeng tightly. "Luofeng, I'm the one who's apologizing. I shouldn't have treated you like this. I'm a terrible sister. I'm sorry!" For the first time, Bai Luofeng saw his sister apologize to him, explaining everything that had happened...

Silly Loli, please update soon!