I Just Want to Be a Nobody

I will never write anything pornographic again.

Decided to rewrite Volume 1

In summary: Overall, it's not bad, and there are some commendable aspects. Okay, that concludes the brief review (laughs). The title is quite good, and the premise is fun, but the writing style is lacking. As a third-person perspective novel, the overall picture and pacing require a solid foundation from the author; too slow and it's boring, too fast and it feels inexplicable. This book falls into the latter category. The early plot can be summed up in one word: rushed, explaining the outcome in a few strokes. In my opinion, this book might be better written from a first-person perspective (in my opinion), because although the early part of the book...

Still writing over a million words? I admire that!

The first few chapters were too rushed; a single sentence would describe how time flies, and then they'd force in new settings. If they had revised and polished the earlier parts, they probably could have kept more readers engaged.

Could you add a follow-up subscription option? My monthly passes are just sitting there anyway. [Sfem:3:312][sfem:3:312]

Keep it up, update soon!

Huh? Generating electricity for love! I'm truly impressed.

Come on

Keep up the good work of authors who are passionate about their craft!