Abandoned After Infection, I Become a Calamity to Take Revenge

This is a mediocre post-apocalyptic story, like most online ones, it's not very interesting. While there are some things I can't say, and writing them wouldn't sell well anyway, isn't it a bit much to just rehash old tropes and try to fool people? Deleting comments and reposting, even if it lacks creativity and has some quirky twists, is acceptable. Even making a quick buck requires some skill, otherwise who will buy it? Readers' money doesn't grow on trees. Show some respect and be more serious, okay?

Well, these kinds of novels seem to all have a common problem: they portray the original protagonist as an utterly incompetent fool. It gives the impression that the author, perhaps lacking the skill to create a more powerful protagonist, resorts to lowering the original's caliber to create a contrast. This guy is, after all, a protagonist, and a reincarnated one at that. He looks like a completely naive and innocent character, utterly clueless. Is it really befitting a reincarnated person? Is it really too much to ask him to clear the game in one life?

To be honest, it currently lacks the elements to become a legendary work; basically, all the content has been written by others. However! After reading the previous long review, I must say something. Does every ordinary person deserve to die? Do you eat abalone and sea cucumber every day? Having read this far, the content, pacing, and plot are all things that people enjoy. You could find countless faults if you wanted to, but what are you reading for? Is it to post nitpicking comments and seek attention? I know many people nowadays juggle four aspects of life—career, life, and personal life—but are unwilling to accept an ordinary life and always want to find validation online. But this...

First, a disclaimer: I haven't read the later chapters; this is only a preliminary evaluation based on three chapters. Further evaluations may follow later. The subject matter is excellent, but the author's writing ability in these three chapters is barely sufficient to maintain the narrative. Too many short sentences and frequent paragraph breaks, with exclamation marks and question marks used in nine out of ten sentences, create a poor reading experience. Punctuation marks are meant to separate sentences and aid in expressing emotion; novels don't need every sentence to be emotional. Using such emotionally charged punctuation and short sentences in every line severely disrupts the narrative's integrity, resulting in a rushed, unclear, and enigmatic feel. ...

It got boring starting with the Ability Academy arc. The protagonist of Destiny increasingly resembled a clown; when the protagonist had no pressure, he resorted to using monsters to annoy the reader. It also became increasingly padded, with a single fight spanning several pages. There was practically no romance.

My conjunctivitis has been really bad these past few days; my eyes are so sticky with discharge that I can barely see. I'll postpone the update for now.

The author's story background is excellent, the main plot is clearly driven, the writing style is superb, and the character development is also very good. For example, in the first few chapters, Shen Feiyan's character was well-developed, and she attracted a lot of hatred, which made me feel particularly uncomfortable and I especially disliked this character. This is very successful in creating a villain. Now that I've read to the later parts, I still feel that it's very good, the writing is very smooth, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

"Don't subscribe to any book before it's finished." — From a long-time reader on SF.

Well, to be honest, I always felt the description of the Lickers was weird. The way the protagonist's sister was portrayed earlier was a bit weak, and the fight scenes... Well, they were just passable. Then there's the part where the protagonist gets surrounded by the Lickers. Fighting spirit? What's the difference between this and those other cultivation-themed web novels? I'm mainly commenting to see what those who have read a lot think. Is this book weak in the beginning but becomes a masterpiece later, or what? Ugh, I'm trying to pad out the word count, I'm trying to pad out the word count, I'm trying to pad out the word count...

Repeatedly describing the same action multiple times within the same chapter becomes tiresome. For example, "He punched the target in the stomach, bang! The target crouched down" is a complete action, but when the author describes it three times consecutively, it easily leads to reading fatigue. Furthermore, since chapters are usually short, the passage ends after three cycles of description, making it feel like padding. Another problem is the author's tendency to cut off a line after each line of dialogue, sometimes even cutting off halfway through a sentence, making it feel like a pirated version. When quotation marks appear, the text has to be restarted, without clearly identifying who is speaking. (Explaining the protagonist...)