These Vixens All Need to Be Taught a Lesson

It's not badly written, and it cost me 20 yuan. But the ending is terrible. What about my sword immortal master? Where's Gong Li? Where's You Tianjun? Oh well.

The author seems to have forgotten that novels are described through dialogue between people, not by mindlessly piling up plot details like a diary. It started off well; why has it degenerated into this rambling, disjointed narrative?

To put it simply, it's a very enjoyable read that can be enjoyed in one sitting. The smooth transition between the slow-paced cultivation elements and the storytelling feels perfect, like being immersed in a tale. It's tangible, relatable, and includes elements of rural leisure, intellectual problem-solving, and well-developed characters with a strong sense of responsibility and family. It doesn't feel like a typical simplistic novel; it has all the necessary plot points, the necessary moments of subtlety, and the necessary serious problem-solving and striving for improvement. The part about changing one's mindset and working hard for a better future for family, subtly altering their predetermined fate, is particularly well-written. The next one should be...

It's good to end things decisively when they're time to end them, rather than dragging things out. Although the ending was a bit rushed, it's still better than writing something forced.

Could you write some side stories to fill in the gaps from the previous ones? The main female characters all have great endings, they've all been defeated, no doubt about that. In the side stories, maybe you could also defeat the Demon Lord and the Sword Immortal, or describe how the Dragon Girl and the others have perfectly established the Demon Empire. That would be great.

This book feels like it's strayed from its original theme. We're reading about the romance and daily life between the male and female leads, their little stories, not about intrigue, conspiracy theories, or the protagonists showing off their intelligence.

Dear author, you could have written a few more side stories. The last bit of regret could have been made up for with them. I don't know if you'll write any more side stories for this novel in the future, but I will definitely keep an eye on it.

In my opinion, this is a rare gem, very good. I want to lock the author in a dark room and squeeze them dry so it can be released quickly with lots of updates. I can't see the 140-character limit, so let me say this: First of all, it's not a simplistic story. As for deeper content, I'm not a professional, so I can't really say. I can only say that while reading, I didn't find any illogical or unpleasant parts. I started reading from the first chapter and finished it without realizing it, without wanting to skip any chapters. It's good, and updates quickly.

The ending felt a bit abrupt, and it seemed like some foreshadowing from earlier parts was left unresolved. What happened to the hatched bird and the kitten?

I want to see the big horse girl