After Being Dumped, My Diary Revealed My Breathtaking Beauty

This split personality + protagonist's absence makes it feel like it has nothing to do with transformation anymore. Moreover, the three personalities don't have each other's memories; they're completely three separate people. Does this even make Qin Hai a protagonist, or is the author just trying to create a harem by splitting off his personalities? The chapters where Qin is absent, with Xiao Lü messing things up, are truly terrible to read.

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To be honest, the later parts were terrible, and had absolutely nothing to do with the transformation. And is the protagonist really Qin, or one of these alternate personalities? The protagonist has absolutely no presence; the alternate personalities are just constantly causing trouble and being annoying. And these aren't even alternate personalities anymore; they're complete inner demons. It feels purely disgusting. After seeing this, I decided to start raising the character.

Doesn't this group of people disregard the authenticity of diaries?

I rarely write reviews, but with this book, I have to say, what kind of nonsense is this?! There's absolutely no main plot, and it doesn't even count as slice-of-life. Nearly 200 chapters in, and I still don't know who the male and female leads are. The diary entries are also unrelated. I simply can't continue reading. Money doesn't grow on trees.

Is this a lily?

I couldn't understand what this book was about. It wrote something that didn't seem like a transformation story or anything like that—it was all jumbled up and I couldn't make heads or tails of it.

This is the first book I've seen where the background is barely explained in the first 30 chapters, and the descriptions are particularly chaotic... It tries to unfold the plot from a second-person perspective, but the pacing is poor, resulting in a strong sense of disjointedness in the story. The dialogue also feels unnatural, as if the initial viewing experience was sacrificed too much for the sake of later plot twists. Furthermore, it feels like the element of revealing the diary has been wasted, turning into a typical "protagonist hides his true strength, girlfriend regrets breaking up with him" trope, making it one of the worst yuri works out of the market.

Well, I lost all desire to continue reading. It was so messy that I skipped through the last two hundred pages and ended up reading other books instead. It would have been better to just write a separate protagonist, at least the protagonist was practically invisible throughout. I even started to wonder if the protagonist had been replaced. I'm outta here, I really don't understand it.

The beginning of this novel was indeed quite good, but the reading experience declined sharply later on, especially when the protagonist developed two incarnations. At first, I thought these were all main characters, just with different identities, but it turns out they are two different personalities? Different people? And their memories aren't even shared. Especially the character Xiao Lü—she's a complete scumbag, constantly building a harem and rebelling against her primary personality. This isn't just a secondary personality; it's a demon! And I'm wondering, is Qin the main character? Or are these incarnations the main characters? They have more screen time than the main character! The main character can't even take back his own body on his own, and the primary personality can't even...