P.S. Fifty chapters on May 1, then another fifty the next day!
So what if I have a big harem?
The once-innocent campus belle has turned dark and contradicts me every day.
The gentle, virtuous young lady of a prominent family keeps trying to make me drink her love potion.
The aloof, proud Valkyrie clings to me, yet keeps her eyes fixed on the position of legal wife, ready to draw her sword.
A mischievous girl known as RedHacker, a righteous policewoman, a princess sold off by a small kingdom, a goddess from another world who betrayed her allies, a considerate mentor who recognized my talent, an overbearing junior apprentice sister...
With more and more girls joining the harem, Lin Lin can't take it anymore. Especially when they split into factions, take sides, and scheme against one another.
Lin Lin timidly raises a hand. "Um, well... I..."
Blind dates during Chinese New Year
Disappointment
I thought this novel was pretty good when I first read it, but it got worse and worse as I read on. Please, we're supposed to be reading slice-of-life stories, and I don't understand why so many books that clearly focus on slice-of-life scenes end up with battles. Please, this book has a bunch of enemies coming up to cause trouble for you at the beginning. Please, write properly! What are you even writing about? Of course, this is just my personal opinion. There was absolutely no harem element in the beginning. Please, write more about the main characters and their harem. You've already written a lot about Yang Fan and Chen. Please, write about the main plot!
The stars won't be fully displayed, but my suggestions are included.
I've read about a hundred chapters, and overall the pacing is decent. However, I felt the quality of these chapters wasn't very high. First, the writing style of the earlier chapters was a bit off-putting, because many of Pineapple Bun's authors don't follow the usual formula, so it's unnecessary for web novels. Second, although it's tagged with yuri, it doesn't really showcase that. It feels like a harem-style, overpowered transformation story, with the female characters always appearing as male, and when they do appear, it's always just some lewd stuff. And then, the relationships between the characters...
Standard Harem Seven Points
The protagonist mindlessly takes in a woman, sleeps with her without any feelings, and even drugs her. The main character doesn't seem to think anything of it and accepts it. I haven't read the later parts so I don't know if things will change, but this part disgusted me. Maybe I don't read many novels like this, or maybe I prefer stories with developing feelings. I'm not just blindly criticizing, but I find it hard to accept. To disregard someone's innocence, especially someone who is a benefactor, for one's own private affairs. In short, the whole scene before Yang drugged her—the moral blackmail, the drugging, etc.—Was full of selfishness and negative energy. This is just my personal opinion, please don't attack me if you disagree.
This is a comment from someone who has been writing book reviews for a long time after reading the book review.
Because of this incident, almost no one is talking in the group anymore. The only talkative person is in a bad mood, making the already quiet group even quieter, which makes me anxious. So I'm writing this review in the hope of resolving the issue. First, please write your book reviews longer, especially critical reviews. They need to be long; the author wrote so much, so at least it reflects their effort. Also, please draft your reviews before writing. You could learn from Li Yuanyi in this regard. Thank you. If you think the plot is clichéd, there are so many original authors in this group; the plots are undoubtedly fresh and niche. I haven't seen your work in any of your books before...
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Nuwa
The title was eaten up by the author's thought process.
At first, I didn't understand why the girl was in the boys' dormitory, but after reading the part about "the transformation effect being about to expire," I quickly understood. There was another part of the plot I didn't understand either, the character relationships were quite confusing. It got much better later on; I like novels that are close to real life (I don't care about the transformation stuff). The author is currently updating twice a day, which is very diligent, but I still feel it's not enough. I originally wanted to give the author monthly tickets or virtual currency, but I was afraid the author would become arrogant (actually, I'm short on cash, cough cough, poor). Anyway, author, keep it up! I'll keep reading!
The protagonist, who has lived for over 5,000 years, is like an idiot + classic transformation scene where he enters a boys' dormitory and gets his body seen + a fat character. I even read over 600 chapters before, what a waste of money!
That jerk tricked me out of my coupons!