After transmigrating into the body of a disciple of a great righteous cultivator, Su Mu found himself stuck with a good-for-nothing constitution. Helpless, he gave up and devoted himself to serving his master. As a result, his master grew useless, was tormented by her old rival, the Demon Lord, and he himself was kidnapped.
He thought he was in for merciless torment, but in the soft bed, amid a delicate fragrance, the Demon Lord turned out to be lusting after his body. You think you can do whatever you want just because you're good-looking? Refuse, and I'll make trouble for your master.
For his master's sake, Su Mu could only sacrifice himself. Congratulations, Host, for checking in with the Demon Lord. Congratulations on unlocking the Driver Card... your Coach Card.
I, Ye Qingxian, should have had a boundless future as a righteous immortal maiden, but I became corrupted by indulging in my disciple's attentions. Now that my disciple has been snatched away, I will cultivate bitterly and grow stronger! Disciple, your master will rescue you very soon.
If the genders were reversed, this book would be ruined.
Even if you didn't want to write it, you could at least have written about the final fate of each female character, or even just mentioned it briefly. Instead, you didn't mention them at all. What's the difference between you and a eunuch?
Can anyone reveal the ending? 🐴
Please don't end it! Let's check back next month and see what happens then.
I just hope they don't just back out halfway through and scam me out of my money.
I think the word choice in the novel could be more precise; instead of just piling on whatever sounds nice.
What the heck? Why did this guy suddenly become a domineering protagonist? So embarrassing!
No way, my dear master hasn't even accepted it yet, and it's already over?
I just hope there won't be any more tragic scenes like in "The Legend of Phoenix," this female demon is really likable.
The beginning was well-developed, and the plan was to introduce a "Mary Sue" (overpowered protagonist) story, but the atmosphere and emotional buildup were problematic. The reason and process of taking in the maid were too abrupt; there was no complete event or plot to develop the maid's personality. Simply describing her misery and the trigger for her being bullied didn't resonate with the reader. Furthermore, the protagonist's somewhat awkward displays of favoritism later on made this part of the story quite unpleasant.