A Romantic Comedy About Being Gender-Swapped in Another World

At first, I was just a passerby, too lazy to even watch. Initially, I only noticed that Bai Di's books were being bombarded with malicious tags, and people were starting to argue with him in the comments section. I wondered if Bai Di had offended someone and was being attacked by so many people. At the time, I was thinking, who was bullying others? The online trolls they sent were basically just spewing insults and that was it, without explaining the cause and effect. However? Yes, there was a turning point. Later, I happened to see comments telling us to go to a post on Tieba, and I felt that I finally understood the cause and effect through that post. Let me state my conclusion beforehand—Bai Di is...

Author's Respect: At first glance, the novel's title seems odd. To be frank, this is a gender-swap novel, and it appears to be your first attempt at writing. (You might consider changing the title later). Judging from the descriptive techniques, you started too late; your Chinese composition skills probably aren't very good either. (Volume 1, Chapter 3), it looks alright, but strictly speaking, you're making up erotic jokes, which doesn't give the reader a good first impression. Looking at women with ( ) eyes, "sweeping" isn't a good word. You could use the meaning of "plunder" to highlight the feeling, and go even further. {Akarea...}

The time-travel and gender-swap elements appeal to sci-fi fans, and the various ability settings are quite good. However, the plot and its values left me completely bewildered. I'm giving it a 9/10 because I found the beginning rather ridiculous. The protagonist transmigrates while playing a game, right before meeting his old flame! Seriously? He's about to meet his old flame, and he's still playing games? Unbelievable... Anyway, how he transmigrates isn't the point. After introducing his abilities, it basically becomes a typical overpowered protagonist story—leveling up, fighting monsters, and picking up girls. Then the plot started to baffle me. First, he kills a group of mercenaries, then leaves them with a sliver of health to finish them off. And that knight really...

I apologize to the reader who just read that; I mistook "nb" for "mb." Sorry...

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After reading more than ten chapters, I felt the pacing in the early chapters was too chaotic, which made it a bit difficult to read.