Can't a Fairy Break Up?

While I enjoy watching "chasing after a husband" scenarios, this one just doesn't quite work. The phrases like "seven years together, one year considering breakup" make the novel illogical. Also, the fact that he cleans other people's rooms and is very intimate with his junior sister during their time together is problematic. This setup itself is flawed; usually, the story should start with the breakup, followed by him meeting his junior or senior sister and developing a romantic relationship.

Tell me, how did you manage to squeeze into the queue of pre-ordered yuri/yandere stories?

If you combine what I've said and analyze the 50-plus chapters the author has written, you'll find that the male protagonist is like a clown. He's supposed to be fine teaching his junior brothers and sisters, but when he tells the female protagonist that dating isn't a one-sided affair, right? It seems like the female protagonist is wrong, but the one who's wrong is you, the male protagonist. He broke up with his girlfriend and immediately started flirting with other girls. How wonderful.

The first three chapters alone are enough to turn viewers off. The male lead is clearly a conflicted person, incapable of achieving anything meaningful... With so many reasons for the breakup, was the woman at fault? It feels like the plot is being forced and contrived, which results in the male lead being portrayed as a conflicted individual from the very beginning.

I didn't get any enjoyment at all. It's neither a proper harem nor a proper romance. The male lead is a complete enigma, hiding his abilities for so long, yet they're still mediocre. Where's the fun in that? The updates are getting slower and slower; maybe it's not far from being abandoned?

I just don't understand. Isn't it just being a jerk to keep flirting after a breakup? Who keeps flirting with their ex-girlfriend after a breakup? Even Korean dramas wouldn't dare write something like that!

The protagonist's initial statement that he was too tired is not what he wanted. It made me laugh. This kind of setting is just scumbag. It only makes people feel that he will run away if he can't sleep with someone. Because the author wrote that he has only had a lap pillow with someone all these years and has not taken the next step. Tsk, did being chaste before marriage offend you?

I'm numb 😅 The author is so good at padding the story. After finishing it, I feel like I've read something, but also like I haven't read anything at all. One plot point can be stretched into several chapters. You say it's romance? Since its release, there's been so little interaction with the female leads, and the main female lead is practically invisible. What kind of writing is this? You say it's cultivation/fantasy? There are absolutely no exciting moments, and with this update speed, I'm completely numb 😅

No, what exactly is the male lead? He has powerful backers, but you can't contact them; he has his own strength, but he doesn't use it. Isn't he just a masochistic, resentful masochist? Isn't this kind of story disgusting to readers?

I sent it. I've been stuck on this for four hours and haven't been able to write it. I'll try again at midnight to see if I can stay up all night and finish it. There's no way I can finish it today.