
Dao Companion Simulator: Fairy, Please Have Some Self-Respect
道侣模拟器,仙子请自重
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Ancient Style
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- English
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550Chapters
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Personal thoughts
After reading many book reviews, I'm getting a lot of complaints about plagiarism. I've read Li Zhitao's book before, *The Fairy Wants to Be Tamed by Me*, which was indeed well-written, but I didn't really like the style, so I stopped after a few dozen chapters. I just read his *The Demonic Sect's Enchantress*... Hmm... The writing style feels similar, not my type. If it becomes popular, it will definitely become well-known, and then some people will be dissatisfied and create derivative works (the story structure is very interesting, but the writing style is different; I find Li Zhitao's stories interesting, but I can't get into them). I previously read *The Demon Master*, which was very good, and then I accidentally discovered that someone had copied it and put it on Qidian...
Does the protagonist really need to care so much about this so-called amnesia? He's a time traveler, which means those memories weren't originally his.
Advice for authors on how to woo female characters from the Western Regions chapter.
Throughout the entire Western Regions arc, it's basically all about conquering female characters and erotic scenes. However, from my perspective, I found it less exciting and more boring. Simply put, a novel isn't like a comic; it can't directly showcase a female character's charm and beauty. A female character's image needs to be developed through a series of stories. Everyday dialogue, actions, and demeanor all contribute to this. The most important character to conquer in this arc, "Sister-in-law," only has two characteristics: beauty and being a sister-in-law. You could say her character is only developed in one or two chapters, the rest is all eroticism, which is unreasonable. To use a doujinshi analogy, the most exciting part of a doujinshi...
I have something to do today, so there will probably only be one chapter.
To be honest, by the middle of the second volume, I couldn't understand what it was about anymore. It kept rehashing memories and rehashing the protagonist's life before he lost his memory, and it had already deviated from the main plot.
I have no other intention than to ask, is it common for a villain to target the female lead at every plot point, and for the male lead to help her, whether intentionally or unintentionally, to escalate the conflict? I used to read stories like this, but I don't really like it anymore. No offense intended, just a reply is fine. I see another villain has his eye on the master's body; it's disgusting.
Let's briefly discuss the content of the recent chapters.
Having read this far, let me briefly point out the current problems with the book. The plot feels a bit too unrealistic. Firstly, new characters are introduced too quickly; the stories of older characters haven't even finished before new ones appear, easily leading to stereotypical characters and writing. Secondly, the writing style in the last two chapters is somewhat immature, especially in the new chapter about Ya Ya. I don't understand the point of repeating herself so much; it makes the character seem annoying. Many characters' backgrounds are also revealed too early, turning the book from a harem novel with mystery elements into a slice-of-life romance harem novel. Frankly, what Pineapple Bun has no shortage of these kinds of books that use affected and pretentious writing styles to create...
It feels rushed; it could have been written much longer.
Liu Yue's storyline was handled poorly, transforming her from a strong yet shy master into a somewhat unreasonable and ill-timed madwoman.
I hate this kind of mindless attempt to demonize villains. Demonizing them is one thing, but can't it be done in a more believable way? It's like they're treating the audience like idiots.