The Demon's Evolutionary Catalog

First of all, I'd definitely give my own child full marks. Honestly, if I were to give it a genuine score, I'd probably give it a 7 or 8... Those who are overly concerned with details are just 9! Now, here's the key point: there are two types of people who hold prejudices against this book. One type thinks the protagonist is a disgusting, overly virtuous hypocrite who saves everyone. The other type thinks the book is full of negative energy and doesn't show any positive energy at all. Then the question arises: why would a book evoke such extreme reactions from readers? I've always been puzzled by this, and even now, I'm not sure I've found the key. Let's first address the issue of some readers finding the protagonist overly virtuous. I want to ask, seeing a little girl in danger...

Up until the part about sealing memories and reincarnation in another world, I thought it was quite good. But after that, I didn't want to read anymore; I instantly lost interest. Like the author said, the later parts might be like a new book, so I lost the motivation to continue. Let me explain my initial reason for reading this book: the title "Demon Evolution" attracted me. I wanted to read about other worlds, demons, tradition, and humanity. I didn't want to read science fiction. There's no other reason; it's just not a book I wanted to read, so I didn't want to continue. I'm writing this review just to leave a record of my reading. Up to the part about sealing memories, it was quite interesting. That's all.

Let's start with the good points... The world of demons is quite interestingly written, basically including all sorts of random characters. Although my wording might be a bit harsh, this novel is indeed more creative and feels more like a real world than most online novels. Now, here's the problem: the male protagonist, Mo Ke... To put it nicely, he's shallow and immature; to put it bluntly, he's xenophobic and a racist. When I read about Ping Shan Village, I genuinely wanted to vomit. Is it really okay for people to be this hypocritical? Think about it, how humane and sincere those demons were! Compared to them, how did the humans treat him? And what about "human life..."

I only started reading it the day before yesterday, and went straight to the part where Nico stabs the protagonist. I have a habit of checking the titles of volumes I finish reading for novels I'm not following. Hmm… a sci-fi world, plus the author's own statement that this volume could be considered a new book, I flipped through a few chapters, and was rather disappointed. I'm currently experiencing a reading slump, so maybe I'm a bit resentful. Seeing the author dedicate a chapter to expressing how much they love their work, and that no one forced me to read it, even though the author only writes these emotional outbursts after a long gap, for someone like me experiencing a reading slump to read so much in such a short time…

First of all, let me say this is good. This book doesn't follow the typical overused online novel formula of an invincible, boastful protagonist. As the author mentioned, the premise is quite interesting, and you can see the author's effort in expressing their thoughts. However, it's overly naive and extreme! I went to look at previous reviews of this book and wanted to ask the author: what is your definition of "human"? Does it mean possessing emotions, intelligence, or necessarily kindness? Please note, I'm not referring to "human beings," but simply "people." Initially, he felt sadness for people like Habona around him, meaning he doesn't necessarily consider them human. It doesn't necessarily mean they have a human appearance, but their bones...

The plot is drawn out and tedious. The initial concept was very novel and worth reading, but problems arose after the reincarnation as a demon. A large amount of space was devoted to describing minor characters, whose names alone reveal their insignificance. They die one after another, only to be immediately replaced by more weaklings. The protagonist's personality is portrayed in a very subtle way. Instead of showing how the protagonist evolves, the focus is on acquiring wave after wave of minions. The comparisons to games like LoL and King of Glory are made, perhaps because you like those games and unconsciously write about them. However, this is very superficial. Don't try to justify it by saying something like, "I'll use a comparison to something." That statement alone shows you don't even know what you're talking about...

This book is one of the most bloated I've ever read. The protagonist's background and upbringing were relatively novel at the beginning, but after inexplicably being transported to a sci-fi world, the story became severely padded, barely connected to the main plot, and felt like it had a completely different author. I couldn't stand it anymore and stopped reading.

As the title suggests, I do like the values ​​you presented at the beginning. However, this work is still at the level of a practice piece; the structure is poor, and the details are poorly balanced. The reincarnation part is too drawn out to read. Collecting a bunch of underlings is exhausting to watch. It's clear the author wanted to depict the differences between the underlings, but the writing skills are simply inadequate. The result is that the differences shown are merely the author's own creations, unengaging, and easily become boring for the reader. It would have been better to just briefly mention them and move on to the next step. I hope the author improves and produces better works!

Overall, the first few chapters were quite good. A common problem with light novels and online novels is that they tend to portray humanity in a negative light, defining good and evil based on preconceived notions and morals. While the writing is good, don't project it too heavily onto reality, or you'll find yourself thinking, "Wow, the world is so ugly! Society is so distorted!" The ideas are too naive and unsuitable for those with immature values. For example, a middle school student with limited life experience and no major life events might constantly talk about the ugliness of human nature. The question is, where did they get these conclusions? It's just that...

I haven't been reading this book for very long. The only reason I started was because I wanted to write an isekai (another world) novel, and also because I was bored. I stopped reading when I got to "Rebirth in Another World," the latest volume. The beginning was quite normal and ordinary, and I didn't feel much immersion while reading. However, the feeling picked up later on, and the imagery became stronger. It's just that it gets a bit chaotic at times, and many chapters in the later parts have overly long explanations of certain things and objects. Also, some sections are really quite long; I hope there can be more paragraphs to make it easier to read. The explanations are fine, but the lack of paragraphs makes it difficult to read. ...