Dragon Tamer

I'm just a high school senior, so please excuse my lack of eloquence. Anyway, enough rambling. Overall, I quite like this book. The writing style isn't particularly profound, but it's smooth and refreshing, and the premise is clear and unique. However, there's one issue with the setting and writing style that I'd like to mention (￣∇￣). First of all, I have no problem with the male lead being overpowered; after all, the "overpowered protagonist" trope is one of the mainstream genres in light novels nowadays. But overpowered protagonist stories have one drawback… which limits the scope of creative expression. I've been reading light novels for at least ten years, and most overpowered protagonist stories only have two development directions: 1…

Overall, this book left me feeling confused and unsure whether to remain hesitant or depressed, but I just couldn't feel happy. It completely failed to engage the reader's emotions. There were just too many women, making it difficult to distinguish them, even those whose names were mentioned (not that the writing was bad). Also, why does every harem novel have a student council president? Don't you think it's cliché? The more unexpected the ending or events in a novel, the more likely it is to attract readers. If readers can guess the ending from the beginning, who will read it? You can refer to other novels, but don't write...

Well, this is my first time writing a book review, so please be gentle! Personally, I prefer healing or depressing stories. As for harem stories, I actually prefer harem heroes. Basically, all harem novels like to portray the male lead as extremely afraid of women, which I dislike; it feels a bit silly. Women practically throwing themselves at him is fine, but three or five women per harem is enough; too many become tiresome! However, one good thing about harem novels is that all the male leads are heroes, strong men, and tolerant of women (a gentle head pat when a woman is angry). But I think the author should include some major events to showcase the male lead; otherwise, constantly shrouding the story in small incidents will...

Hmm, old books still have that charm.

Personally, I think the novel is very good overall. However, there are too few fight scenes (you'll get used to it with more practice writing climaxes). Also, how many female characters are in the harem? I can't even remember the names of all the female characters who appear in the story anymore, except for Chixin and Kaya. Most of the others are a bit confusing. Could you tell me how many female characters appear? Who are the main female characters? I'm currently guessing Chixin (my favorite) and Kaya.

I just started reading, but even the protagonist's first line, spoken in one breath, felt very unnatural. I suggest the author read it aloud to themselves after finishing it; this would make it easier to revise, making the dialogue smoother and removing unnecessary words. I tried to revise the sentences, and… If you feel uncomfortable having your writing edited, I apologize in advance! I simply wanted to express my thoughts. And I hope you can continue to work hard. A novel is built from plot, setting, and writing style. Don't underestimate writing style; if you can achieve 3/3, why only…

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I started reading this book as soon as it began. I'm a plot-driven reader, so I don't care too much about the writing style (not that it's bad). I prefer harem stories with overpowered male leads. Well, I've also read Fairy Tail and Seikoku, so I have quite a few things to complain about... But since taking it too seriously is pointless, I won't go into details. My suggestion is that Misaki should always use her full name, even in narration, she could use abbreviations... Other than that, there are too few battle scenes (I know it hasn't reached its climax yet), so it's not exciting. Also, although I don't care about the writing style, it's written rather stiffly = = Author, keep it up! I've been waiting for you so long for your college entrance exam!

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