
When the Demon King Reincarnated as a Hero
当魔王转生为勇者之后
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 979k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 9y ago
- English
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400Chapters
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4.1kFavorites
8.9Score
1kLikes
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Just reading, passing by, and leaving a casual comment.
I quietly read some of the content, and the first few chapters were quite good. Very funny. Especially the premise—the Demon King becomes a masochistic hero, and conversely, it seems a hero has become a Demon King. Interesting. However, even though the Demon King has been reincarnated as a human, and although he doesn't like humans, he can already walk, yet he still plays pranks—isn't that a bit over the top? But isn't a light novel supposed to be a bit humorous? I feel like the author could highlight the male protagonist's adorable qualities through other aspects. It seems the author wanted to emphasize the male protagonist's cuteness. There are some endearing contrasts. These are just my personal opinions, please forgive me.
If you can't even do the basics right, what are you doing writing novels?
My only feeling is: there are too many typos! This might be the work with the most typos that I've ever read. """", """", Otherwise, I estimate it would take me half an hour to finish typing this comment. Stop relying on automatic correction! Can't you check it yourself after you finish writing it? Am I just too lazy, or do I think my readers are all idiots? What was supposed to be a great story was completely ruined by typos! What are other readers supposed to think? The author must take this seriously! This is not only a responsibility to the readers, but also a responsibility to your own work! Be serious...
No more updates?
I'm thinking, if it's a rebirth and she lost her powers, she couldn't possibly be completely powerless, right? Secondly, she still has her memories, but what about her combat memories? Are they really that weak? It feels really unrealistic.
Well, just a casual comment. Personal opinion.
The Demon King... Well, how should I put it? He's at least a king. He should have some personal charisma and presence. Even if he's reincarnated or mutated, those things about him as a king should still be there. Even if his abilities are weaker (compared to his Demon King days), his inherent qualities aren't so easily changed. In the work, it feels like the Demon King is just a forced addition. They use him when they need to, ignoring everything else, writing him like a normal person. Doesn't that feel a bit off? It seems like the author is underestimating the Demon King...
A very good book
After the Demon King becomes the Hero, the protagonist manages to survive in such an awkward situation, which is quite remarkable. He's constantly subjected to his parents' public displays of affection, and as an adult, he can't bear the torment and impact of it all. His reactions to his father's actions are truly hilarious. While the abilities are a bit clichéd, I personally think the concept is good, and the restrictions on their use allow for more comprehensive development in the future. I really liked the twins, and the illustrations of them are absolutely beautiful. If they were in color, I'd definitely use them as desktop wallpapers, especially since this novel features...
Offering incense
Tomb sweeping
Update tomorrow
Let's call it a day.