The Witch's Revenge: A Dark Fairy Tale

The book is excellent, with clear logic, a tight plot, and well-paced storytelling. All the characters are fully developed and coherent, with no absurd or illogical moments. Because it uses a power system similar to those in the Mysterious World series, coupled with the author's strong writing skills, the battles and confrontations are very engaging. It's a highly recommended read. For a moment, I couldn't even think of any words of praise. Coherent characters, a coherent plot, and a sound logical chain are essential qualities of a novel, but many novels fail to achieve them. This novel achieves them, which is truly commendable. The power system is similar to those in the Mysterious World series, but not entirely the same. In my opinion...

I originally only intended to write a short review, but I ended up writing too much and it took up space for a long review. The plot and setting are excellent, and the logic is unusually well-rounded. However, I came for the yuri tag, so I value the romance. So far, I've only seen the part where Joan of Arc and Isula are talking to each other. To be honest, these two still seem to see Alice as a man. Generally, gender-swap stories need to show the protagonist's psychological transition from male to female, and the lover, as a lingering trace of their former identity, also needs to accept that their lover has changed from male to female. This book lacks these two aspects. From the perspective of a companion, the Mad Hatter is...

The author's writing is excellent, but I hope they can put more effort into building the world-building in their next book. The problem lies in the combat system, where the gaps between different levels are too large, making the existence of (balanced teams) seem extremely weak. At the same time, the bishop's ability to directly interfere with the thoughts of others is even more fatal, because this ability can make all (righteous) struggles seem like child's play. Two flaws directly resulted in a very poor sense of immersion and engagement in the later stages of the article.

The author started a new book at a certain point; the author's ID is "Feeding Pigeons in the Square".

1. Overall: Decent, no major flaws, and don't expect too much from the author. What pleases me is that the protagonist is at least intelligent, without the forced intellectual decline common in most other books, which is commendable. 2. Plot: Somewhat clichéd, but not a direct copy, so it's acceptable. It's also worth noting that although it's called a dark fairy tale, it basically borrows the name; there are very few truly fairy tale elements, except for the Alice in Wonderland part. 3. Weaknesses: Having read up to volume three, there are only two major weaknesses. The first is the description of the cat being sacrificed at the beginning; frankly, it would have been better if it weren't there. The cat's...

If the author keeps writing, I'll subscribe to the whole thing! The current chapters are simply not enough. The style of this book is quite to my liking, mainly because the protagonist isn't pretentious and remains very calm even as a woman. Many of Pineapple Bun's stories are in the cute and quirky style, but *Alice the Vengeful Witch* feels quite different. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Keep it up, author! (Purple Sweet Potato Pudding)

New book: I Became a Follower of an Ancient God ID: Feeding Pigeons in the Square Platform: [Platform Name]

Doesn't the author consider starting a new book?

The name "Supreme Heaven" feels a bit odd as the first rank of Paladin. While "Supreme Heaven" means the tenth heaven in ancient Hebrew, Seraphim hold an extremely high status in the West; few terms have a more prestigious connotation. One can sense the author's reluctance in choosing "Supreme Heaven." Furthermore, since "Supreme Heaven" is currently the only three-character title, I feel "Savior" would be a better choice for the first rank. In religion, Jesus Christ, as the incarnation of God, is indeed higher in rank than Seraphim like Michael and Gabriel. Moreover, the title "Savior" is very suitable for the pinnacle of the Holy Light system, associated with great blessings and healing...

It was fantastic! I was planning to get up early the next day to get things done, but I got so engrossed in the plot that I stayed up all night reading quite a bit – ugh! The plot is tight and logical, and I really liked the character development. On Pineapple Bun, a platform dominated by light novels, it's rare to see such a challenging topic. As a reader of gender-bending novels for almost 10 years, I haven't seen such a high-quality yuri (male/female) novel in a long time. This is my first long review; I hope the author maintains the quality in the subsequent chapters! (Sobbing, I haven't even reached 140 words yet, just padding out the word count!)