
This Demon Princess Is Not the Final Boss
本魔族公主才不是最终Boss
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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Your first time was given to me, hehe.
The plot is fast-paced and well-structured, seamlessly blending the main storyline with a glimpse into the protagonist's life three hundred years prior, providing readers with an understanding of the overall world-building. It skillfully blends subtle details with clear narratives, making for a smooth and engaging read. The character development is also excellent, with both main and supporting characters receiving meticulous attention. For example, the protagonist's youthful exuberance as a hero, his coldness as the Demon King's daughter, and his current detachment are all vividly portrayed. Even minor characters, like the Four Heavenly Kings, are portrayed with remarkable silliness...
Regarding the differences between Ji Bai and Angelina (in my personal opinion)
First, I must admit that the initial character settings and plot of this story are very similar to those of "Captured and Became a Vampire Princess," but as you read on, you'll find significant differences. While Ji Bai is strong, there are others stronger than her, but Angelina is arguably the strongest person on the entire continent besides her mother. Therefore, their personalities and the novel's plot differ. Ji Bai cannot easily reveal her identity as the Knight King or the Vampire Princess during fights, making her hesitant and timid. Angelina, on the other hand, simply wields her greatsword and hacks and slashes without revealing her identity, and there's no need to worry about her being outmatched. Ji Bai's plot is essentially a conquest...
Book Review of Volume 1
It's a bit frustrating, a feeling of suppressed emotions with nowhere to go. The satisfying moments in the plot just won't materialize. It feels like everyone in the story is there to sabotage the protagonist—either hindering him, displaying a twisted sense of humor, or harboring malicious intent. The protagonist's life is so suffocating. The great hero, a true warrior, becomes a demon princess, and Angelina barely gets any screen time in the entire volume—just a minor character who dies after killing the queen. Even though Angelina is the one who ultimately takes the blame, and the fact that the royal family covets the hero's bloodline isn't even revealed, what's the point of using Elwin's identity? They might as well have just used Angelina's identity to brute force their way through. Compared to someone from hundreds of years ago, the now-famous hero...
The book is good, but I really dislike the personalities of the supporting characters.
Having read the second chapter of the book, and seeing the loli emperor go out alone, I really wanted to write this review. In the first chapter, there was that pair of knight siblings—the sister was completely clueless, doing whatever she wanted without considering anything else, and the brother didn't even think about anything, ignoring everything the protagonist said. Even when the protagonist said he could handle it, he went to help but make things worse, ultimately causing trouble for others. How can people like that be doing well now? Then in the second volume, with the loli emperor, seeing her with that black-robed demon and fighting that skeleton, the difference in combat power was so obvious, and someone whose combat strength was unknown just helped by shooting an arrow, and people thought it was going too far…
The back garden is mine now~ (This demon princess is not the final boss)
Before reading "This Demon Princess Is Not the Final Boss," please note: This is a subjective review, with no irresponsible speculation, no spoilers, and no content details. This is just a regular book review. First, the subjective rating (out of 10): Writing Style: 7 (Relatively good, easy to understand) Plot: 6 (Some plot points are relatively weak, but overall good) Novelty: 7 (As a classic villainous boss story, the combination of a yuri twist creates a good spark) Potential: 8 (Has the potential to be a huge hit) Overall: 7 (Excellent light novel) +1 (Future growth points) First of all, congratulations to Xiao Hei! This book has the potential to be a huge hit, and both the theme and the story are already well-handled...
Further discussion
Reasoning is the least effective way to reach a conclusion. There's a discrepancy between your writing intention and the final result, and similarly, there's a difference between my book review's purpose and its final effect. Let me add the following points to encourage us to consider the issue from the perspective of the final creative outcome. After this, neither of us should reply anymore; it's a waste of time. Let's just learn from each other. 1. Borrowing formatting is still borrowing; light novels value good formatting. From the perspective of the final creative outcome, it does create a sense of déjà vu, and many people have seen it in the brief review and chapter comment sections. The work is already written this way, so further discussion is pointless. Next time I start a new book, I'll be more careful...
As I was looking at the menu, I started thinking about how much a full subscription would cost, and then I accidentally clicked on it and over 5000 Fire Scrolls disappeared from my account.
Personal thoughts
When I first started reading this book, I suspected it might be plagiarized. But as I continued, I realized it was completely different from another novel, except for the genre and the initial plot. Then, when I saw it required a subscription, I subscribed to all of them. The reason I didn't give it a heart is because you lost Ange's sister. Have some self-awareness, don't say I didn't make it obvious. The sister's plot is even closer to the skeleton than her sister's, you're out of content. Yuri warning, stay calm.
A hero who can't take care of girls isn't a good princess.
This novel perfectly portrays a protagonist who is extremely heartbroken and helpless. Sent by the world to fight monsters whose levels are misunderstood, wearing the greenest hat (a metaphor for being cheated on), only to discover in the end that he's just a shameful, immature teenager—oh! No, now it should be a young woman. It always seems like the girls around the protagonist bring a lot of trouble, and why didn't anyone recognize Elwin for so long? The princess just wanted to live a peaceful, unpretentious, and quirky life at home, without her mother's nagging. It's pitiful, a pity, and adorable ớ ₃ờ
It's so beautiful!
I'm not good at writing book reviews, let me first organize my thoughts. However, based solely on the author's previous book, "I Was Forced to Become the Lord of Monsters After Drawing an SSR Fox Girl," I can already rave about this book. It's definitely worth reading. 1. This book is rich in romanticism, with a light and smooth writing style, without any tedious or verbose lines, which is its main artistic feature. The author focuses on expressing genuine feelings rather than adhering to superficial resemblance, resulting in an unconventional and transcendent style. Whether describing people or narrating events, there is a blend of reality and illusion, a hazy and dreamlike quality, and a fantastical and ethereal atmosphere. The novel and unique conception is rare among authors, giving the reader a feeling of being drunk and oblivious to the sky reflected in the water, a boat full of sweet dreams pressing down on the Milky Way...